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Reviews for: In The Shadow Of The Serpent
Taeniaea
2008-09-09 . chapter 8
great story
TheBloodHarlot
2007-09-12 . chapter 8
Let me just say, that your story is AMAZING

& it deserves a hell of a lot more reviews than it's getting

The plot & pace of this story's just brilliant!

I'm just speechless...

~off to read more
Death Is Watching
2007-02-05 . chapter 8
okay, how strange is it that as i got to the entrence of the Doc. my music changed to be Sylvia's Mother by Dr. Hook? Anyway i love this story and i am gona go read some more of your work now!
Spikesagitta
2007-01-16 . chapter 1
i think this isnt bad, i like the story so far. must say that it's must better written compare to the first story, at least that what i think
Hekima
2005-03-01 . chapter 2
OK, I'll leave a more thorough review once I get to more of the story, but for some odd reason I feel like leaving one right now to say I loved Blackfire's line about how she likes being a bad girl and I can't seem to stop laughing at Sky Phantom And The Opera Of Tomorrow. Oh, and I like how Blackfire's in Terra's old room and Beast Boy flipped out. Most entertaining. And it's good to see Fixit again. Yay!
wordbearer
2005-02-27 . chapter 8
Hey. I just realized that you got only two reviews for this entire fic as far as i can tell. Good job. Very good job. Me gusta mucho. peopel in character yet developing and exclent tension thrughout the entrie piece. tight prose and subtle OC villains. Keep up the good work.
Billy Rose
2005-02-07 . chapter 8
i don't mind about the humor
is this the end of the fic?
because i was seriously hoping for raven/blackfire in this(there just aren't that many, which blows, b/c its a good pairing)
love the pairing
if this is the end, is there gonna be a sequal?
awesome fic
A.D.
2005-02-05 . chapter 8
I REALLY liked your story. You should take over the show once it ends. Actually I didn't care about the lack of humor. I really liked Shift and I loved how used legions name to portray his abilities. Can't wait for another.
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