VERY good. Your writing style fits in extremely well with that of Earthsea, and the tale is great.

Very pretty! A cute little story, fairy-tale esque. No, more like a fable, because it has a moral and everything. I really enjoyed it, and now I'm off to read the other two...

it is SO well written! i thouroughly emjoyed it, and now im going to go read more of your stories :) GREAT JOB!

Bravo!:D
In just a year recently, I have discovered the trilogy of 'A Wizard of Earthsea', and I have come to love the style and the stories, all of them. You have done justice to it with this story, I really enjoyed it

Amazing story! Absolutely enchanting.

Very pretty. So sweet and emotive. You capture the personality of a Gontish mother very well. I'm jealous, for my Earthsea Fanfiction didn't turn out half as well as this.

that was very good. i loved it.
you discribed everything so i saw Tenar doing everything in my mind's eye. excellent, Eldrice.

that was a very, very sweet story and I loved it.

Really great! have you tried reading 'The Left Hand of Darkness' by LeGuin? it's good, but really hard. try it.

Lovely. Lovely, lovely.

Heehee, I loved that.

I love Earthsea dearly! This was brill, well done luv,

Lady F

I love this. Keep it coming!

Sweetly done and very believable! Thank you for this cute little tale. I was wandering about and wondered if there were Earthsea fanfics and was delighted to see there were. Thank you for writing a good one.

This is really cute! (I love the Earthsea books!)

You know what this reminds me of?
"The Midnight Ride of Paul Revere"
The opening line seals it,
It was pretty to read.
As well as I, I was completely disappointed in the Sci-Fi channel presentation. Ugh. I was about to slay my t.v. right then and there if it got up to walk. Oii.. it sickened me when my family thought it was a great movie.
Ah, well. Softly spoken, like an actual mother, speaking to her child.