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| SiniseLuvr 2006-05-19 ch 1,  | abuseHoly... crap... I actually read this before I got an account and reviewed it (I am Glinda, the anon one), but dang, it still got me this time around!! Fabulous job! |
| Glinda 2006-02-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseO...m...g... that was so beautifully orchestrated! *dies* You just captured their animalistic qualities so masterfully, just as I envisioned them to be (but never could get down onto paper myself)! |
| Pixie Child 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. And sweet. And adorable... |
| Stellaluna 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThe sensual imagery here is gorgeous, and you capture Mac's disquiet at his own desire in a really sharp fashion. The potential of this pairing jumped out at me on the show fairly early on, and you've nailed its complexity. |
| Dr FooFoo 2005-01-06 ch 1, | abuseO... Very well-written. Despite the fact that Mac frightens me to no end, your imagery was totally awesome, especially that line about Danny eying Flack in the locker room. I can so totally see that. :D |
| yaba 2004-12-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful language, i enjoyed reading it, especially the part of Danny peppered with hickeys ;) |
| Kuroi Neko-kun 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abuseOh... I could read this over and over and still enjoy it. I really like this and Danny/Mac is my favorite pairing. Definitely need to write more now. Enjoyed it. :D |
| HYPERPISCES 2004-12-23 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. Nice use of language. I really liked it. |