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| Kurai-Gaara 2008-07-17 ch 19,  | abuseAh, so cool. I really like how you suggested muscle memory and such. Does that mean the girls sort of have an imprint of the guys memories and such also? |
| DaAmazingMeepers 2008-07-11 ch 19, | abuseOh man, I LOVE IT! Make more soon please! And also, maybe you could make Carson fall in love with one of the other hybrids rescued...9.9 |
| Chinabear62092 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abusewow, it's nearly been a year since you've updated this story, and I'm here to tell you that this is in dire need of continuation, and I am a huge fan of teenage mutant ninja turtles, and only one other story besides this has come close to the greatness of this story, I myself am working on a TMNT story, but it probably won't be as good as this... |
| Random 2008-04-19 ch 19, anon. | abusePlease please update! i have been dying to know how it all ends. please :] |
| davewriter 2007-09-18 ch 19, | abuseHi, Ana. Sorry it took so long to respond, but I just got so wrapped in other things computer. This chapter is quite well-written. I don't have much to say for it, except I think the idea of the girls training is sound, especially since they're up against a lot, and they've inherited the guys' fighting styles when they mutated, which I think is way cool. I have a feeling this is exactly what they'll need as they take down the people who are responsible for this and the affairs of the Karten case. Looking forward to next chapter. I hope the training isn't all for naught. |
| Rain of Mystery 2007-08-11 ch 19, | abuseI can't wait for another update! Keep it up! |
| miss.roxyREMKE 2007-08-02 ch 19, | abuseamazing |
| X-MenFan1 2007-07-30 ch 19, | abuseVery good! How long until Mikey and Delaney get married? Please update soon |
| Chinabear62092 2007-07-28 ch 18, | abuseGET ANOTHER ONE OUT! I am on the edge of my seat here and I don't want to wait! this is getting so good and now I can't stop reading TMNT fan fictions!! |
| thechickenlittle 2007-07-13 ch 18, | abusesweet and terrifically funny!! i loved it! |
| miss.roxyREMKE 2007-07-13 ch 18, | abusei really thought it would be raph and callista. but very very great chapter. update as soon as possible... please. |
| X-MenFan1 2007-07-13 ch 18, | abuseand I thought it would be Raph and Callista. Please update soon, This is an amazing story. |
| davewriter 2007-07-13 ch 18, | abuseGreat chapter, and it's great that the mutated people are finally getting back to normal, as evidenced by Don's experiment. That scene with Delaney was trying to discipline Coral was nicely-written, though in the future, someone may want to keep a close eye on her, and remind her that she shouldn't go through other people's things. They will listen. (Based on my experience around my friends' kids... lol!) What a shocking surprise that one of them is pregnant, and eve more shocking was they it's Leo and Amity. Now they are the last couple I'd expect to become expectant parents at this point since didn't Amity just graduate from college? But I guess Delaney and Mikey aren't ready yet, are they? My only question is, will Amity lose the pregnancy once she gets back to normal? I'm guesing that this next chapter will be the last, right? Looking forward to a great conclusion. |
| X-MenFan1 2007-07-03 ch 9, | abuseSo is chapter 16 the lasy chapter? I wanted Mikey and Delaney to get married and have kids and the others of course. well I reviewed on chapter 16 so that is why I reviewed on this chapter. which is very good. take care and Update soon. I LOVE MIKEY |
| Tigerprime 2007-06-22 ch 17, | abuseVery very emotional this story has been hope you'll continue it Wonder if there's still time to change the girls back or if it's too late (like for Sandra) |