this is really awesome i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

::chuckles:: Nicely done. There are some errors here and there, but overall it's a fun read. Any chance of this being continued?

I agree. Sand DOES suck. Like the intake of a jet engine. ::nods::

UPDATE NOW!

UPDATE NOW!

Great story! Most SIs I've read aren't this short but this is quite well written. You just need to lengthen your chapters. PLEASE UPDATE OR SUFFER IN HELL! -

Hot damn! another good fic. When is more coming? Soon? Now? Later? When will later be now? Soon? Ive been watchin Spaceballs too often...mumblemumble...

Pretty cool, better than most of the short SIs I've read lately. It took me a long time to find season 7 too, but one day I found it on with the ova series really cheap. I think I'll add this to my c2. Please write more soon!_

This is progressing nicely cant wait for more chapters

:D Cool chapter :D I wonder what his excuse for knowing the Jurian style is gonna be... did he learn it from Tenchi of something? ... M...

The sound of clapping hands. A pretty decent little bit SI. Send more when you can.

Genma stairs in shock blinking. Do you mean "stares" or "stared"?

before we beat the piss outa him toghter Would it be better done "together"?

Just two items this time, other things I saw, I just attribute to your style.

Ciao,

Wes

...*starts bashing head agains wall* *BAM* is *BAM* their *BAM* no *BAM* end *BAM* to *BAM* souns *BAM* and *BAM* genmas *BAM* stupidity!

its kind of funny that way but what will the chinese morons do when they see ryu and ranma togeather...

So Tenchi and the gang will most likely show up in this story? Sweet! I can't wait to find out how Nodoka is related to Tenchi. How long till we get to see Genma/Mr. Panda reduced to a quivering mound of pain?

I'd like to see a way for Washu to be able to double-glomp the Saotome brothers/sisters. After all, she needs new guinea pigs, and those two would keep her occupied longer than Tenchi. Just be careful how you approach the subject of powers and the light-hawk wings.

Good luck, I look forward to seeing how you cross them over with Sailor Moon. Just don't fall for the "felt up by a drunk haruka and Michiri" path.

Innortal

I see yet another author has succumbed to the temptation of writing an SI.

Certainly an interesting concept and way of handling the insertion. I'm interested in seeing where this is going, but since you're going overseas, it may be awhile. Too bad, so sad.

Good luck and come home safe.

I tend to agree with Innortal to some degree about the storyline. My thought is that Genma and Ranma took a month to arrive in Nerima from Jusenkyo, so their arrival would be sometime after Shampoo's arrival? How about a mixed up Shampoo trying to kill Ranma-chan seeing double when Ryu walks up. Thinking, spring of drowned twins, or other mix ups? Kuno could go nuts with two 'Osage no Onnas'. Good story.

Ciao,

Wes

Spelling and usage:

sparing is a verb as in 'Sparing their lives' the double r 'sparring' means to have a practice match.