hey loved the story i hope u continue w/this its really good cant wait 4 more updates.

Totally enjoyed the story. You should, perhaps, consider a sequel where Sara gets to meet Grissom's Mom. Great work.

Again, a nice job of bringing everything together.

Not a bad chapter at all. Pretty realistic, actually. These type of fences do not mend overnight. Good job.

I thought the conversation between Sara and her Mother went pretty well. Of course, it will take some time for them to become friends, but I'm pleased none the less, with the effort on both parts.

As for Sara and Grissom. I hope that Grissom bear the brunt of Sara's misplaced aggression, I'm sure Sara will work it out.

Certainly an awkward situation for Sara as well as Grissom. Hope they can hold it together until we can find out what went on with Laura Sidle.

I've been reading this story for a while, but I am only reviewing now because I just logged in to post my own story for the first time. I loved every chapter and I was really sad to see it come to an end. Great work, I loved it! I hope to see you write another story soon.

what an ending! cant believe it ;) great story... will you write a sequel? would be fun!

hope you write more stuff!!

YAY! i knew that he was gonna propose rite from the start of the chapter for sum reason, i dont know why, maybe im physic!! lol!! plz post more soon!! i wanna kno wot happens next!!
Love Megan

Great story! So cute! Loved the ending!

That's cute-I love the sneaky way Gris planned this!

He got down on his knee!

That's romantic-and I love the others reaction to Laura, very nice!

Thanks for a great update-now what?

One more chapter, really? Anyway, it's really good though. Well done.

*pouts at the one more chapter* this is really good i personally think ECkile should walk under a ladder and have it fall on him but... one another not i think it is great that the team just wants Griss and Sara to be happy

Cool!! this is really good!! lol!! i love that last bit! plz post more soon!! i wanna kno wot happens next!!
Love Megan

Oh my gosh, this chapter is so nice, warm and loving-like! I feel all fuzzy just reading it! Just my usual begging of the author to continue posting, so yeah, please continue posting (my hands get cramped after a while of pleases in, like, ten different storys) But anyway, this was cool, and please post again.