From the begging to this point has very good.Keep it up and update soon,

Not bad for such a long absence. That hamer you gave her now is insanely powerful. I doubt the Soul edge in the game has that kind of Stat on it. I could be wrong but that's how I feel. Now, I do think you could work on your grammer a bit, however I'm fairly happy with the amount of detail you put into this chapter. You could have done a better job describing the priest but that works for now.

Hmm...that was strange. Amy fought herself, and got...an evil hammer. Huh.
What's next for her?

the environment needs a little work with it's detail but it was not bad. Assassin huh? not a bad fight i say.

alright i think that this chapter has got to be your most descriptive chapter yet. but there is still room to improve. try and describ the environment as well as the characters. the better the details on both, the better the story. ah well i hope you take that to heart. good job, keep up the good work, and update soon.

not a bad update here. although i think you could do without the mid battle taunts, they seem to mess up the battle sequences. also try using the spelling check on your microsoft word or on whatever you have. then take it to a good friend of yours and have him/her read it for you and help you catch all of your grammer mistakes and what not thats what i'm having done thats why i dont have my story up right now. oh well later and dont go too long without updating.

Nicely done battle scene. Just try not to repeat words too much, "chop" for example. Besides, I think the environment was better painted this time, and the descriptions more detailed. I see more characters have been introduced to the story, that's good, but be sure to take care of every of them; when you have many characters, it becomes more difficult to keep up with all of them. Well, hugs, kisses, and wishes of good luck with your fic.

Quite nice, the story starts to unravel. Just one thing, that salesman scene probably lasted a bit too long. Other than that, pretty nice, and I've seen that you've slightly improven your skill. By the way, sorry I couldn't send this review earlier, there was a server problem or such. (hugs)

i say this with al honesty and to help you better your writting improve dramaticly. let a good friend of yours read through your story before you post it. this way you catch all the mistakes before you let your adoring fans read it. my story is currently in the works i'm getting a friend of mine to read it just to make sure i did a good job.

I luvs it.1 quetstion where's Link?Is he gona show up soon and will he be imature.It'd be so cute and funny like if an enemy tried to hit him he could loony toon there asses.THAT'S It have him still be inocent but just a tad of romancer.
O.k. that made no sence.aham...Link should be a child at heart but still have the mind of an adult.a move suggetion present.from poke'mon.
Link wraps up a bomb and gives it to the bad guys then when they open it..BLAMO!hehehe^_~.It'd give Link a pranckster apperence.And Amy is such a bad ** in this story nomaly I'd hate Amy but you made her cool.I luvs it o.k. i'm done Adios from Harpy Link452

I must say this one has some awesome potential. Plus I've always been obsessed with SC2, except for when it comes to some of the Extra missions in WeaponMaster mode...but that's beside the point. I really like where this is going, and I'm not quite sure if I can wait for the next chapter, even if it is "postponed". Just don't take too long now. :)

caliblade
A weapon gallery ...
I could give you 4 types of hammers...

thor's hammer (moijoir.)

offence: 80

defence: 100

adventeges: N/A

disadventeges: N/A

the legendery battle hammer used by the norce god of thunder, thor. the hammer was said to have the power to summon earthquakes. since it was use by a god it is un likely for a mortal to use it.

soul edge

offence: 140

defence: 100

adventeges: N/A

disadventeges: each strike, sucessful or not drains health. health drains over time.

an evil blade with a reputation of devouring souls. this weapon is also known as a shape-shifter-which form it takes depends on it crurrent owner.the forms it take are legendery, as are the souls it has consumed. only those with great mental discipline can retain thier will while holding this weapon.it can unlock the holders true power but eats away the soul in return.

wooden mallet

offence: 80

defence: 80

adventeges: N/A

disadenteges: N/A

a simple wooden mallet made from super strong wood. it has been used numuruos times for building furniture. it may be a tool but it may catch the opponent off guard.

knuckles' hammer

offence: 120

defence: 110

adventages: health increaces with soul charge

disadventages: shorter reach

A hammer use by knuckes' ancestors for battle. it was made from a mistirious metal that can only be found around mystic ruins.it is said the the metal has the ability to enchanted the users strenth. its light weght and strong offence makes it perfect for battles.

so there you go...

hmm... mitsurugi is her teacher. it has the beginnings of a great story please continue. up date soon.

Nice! *thumbs up*. The plot is doing well, even when Amy learned to fight in no time, it was still very good. And Mitsurugi might be being a lot friendlier tnan I remember, but, it's not my story. Oh, and just for you to know, a samurai sword is called a Katana. And just one pointer; in the note, Mitusuruti told Amy to go Thuban, but he didn't say what for. Oh, and just a cultural thingy: when training, before starting, the Rei salute most be done. This is just slightly bending the upper body forwards, never loosing sight of the enemy/training partner. This is as seen on karate movies and such. I was just saying because this is very important to japanese, espcially to one as proud as Mitsurugi. Keep up the good work, and remember always to give your best. Just one last thing *kisses*. ^^

This is cool! Come to think of it, they should of had one of the characters from Sonic Adventure in the game. Nice work and please update soon!