Are not Zack and Tinga portrayed as siblings? Why then are thtye kissing and feeling on each other? they're brother and sister.

ahhh!!! it ended! thats not fair :) i love max/zack fics, and there are WAY to few of them...keep writng please:-)

my preciousss.....

I love it...

aren't u going to continue this story

I don't know if you remember, but I read your story when you posted it before, and I said that it was good except for the whole Zack "gettin' some", then leaving. Well, I withdraw my previous opinion and say instead that it's *all* good. *g* Keep up the good work!

I love this fic! Please continue. =)

okay I have NO idea whatsoever of when this was set but it was defianetly good! Is there more to it?

love your story, wonderful perspective on the X5 relationship

i love ur story please write more and soon

This story is great!!!! I'm glad Max finally has that contact number!

Please write more soon!!!this was really good!!

VERY GOOD STORY HURRY WITH THE NEXT PART THERE IS GOING TO BE A NEXT PART ISNT THERE. PLEASE SAY YES.

Oooh, I like this. It's nice to think Max isn't the only one who's looking for family, and Zack's jealousy and anger is so perfectly in character. I like your Tinga characterization a lot--wanting family but not losing her head over it (like Max could be said to), and going behind Zack's back like that.

I LOVE it! It was great!

This is a pretty good story, keep it up. I like how Tinga realized that Zack really wanted Max and not her and that she stopped them from going any further. Get part 2 out soon K!