There were some things I had forgotten to mention.

How did they both end up at the clubroom? Did they each have their own reasons for going there in the first place?

I also thought that Oishi would have talked about the doubles lineup with Kikumaru first before changing it, even when he was mad. Then again, love does get people OOC.

Good story! Good job on the characters, feelings, and struggles! I almost burst into tears. I really don't get along with sad stuff, but I'm glad it had a happy ending. If it didn't, then I wouldn't have read it.

I also wish they had confessed without all those problems happening, but maybe all of that was necessary to get them to realize their feelings and confess. Hopefully, Oishi didn't catch Kikumaru's cold at the end.

Actually, it wasn't all Oishi's fault. Kikumaru was the one who started the whole thing by not visiting Oishi. Still, I thought Oishi would have at least asked Kikumaru about it instead of letting things get worse. Then again, love can really make people act differently. I hope Kikumaru did tell Oishi why he didn't visit.

I think you did well on both POV. I like how you alternated them little by little, or it would have been hard to follow. Unlike most people, I usually find Oishi's POV easier to understand and write, and Kikumaru's POV harder.

Why couldn't they all eat lunch together? They just had to decide on a place to eat. Also, if Fuji and Kikumaru were eating in their classroom, they wouldn't have to worry about being late because they would already be where they're supposed to be.

I guess you wrote this before watching the last few episodes or reading about the regulars' rooms. Kikumaru shares a room with his older brother. Were both his older brothers and oldest sister away at college?

I loved it! It was so awsome! I just absolutally loved it!

FINALLY DONE! For Christ's sake, I should never sign onto the GPficdatabase after 10pm, else I'm DOOMED.

And the database, IT LIES! It said that this was an Eiji/Oishi fic, not an Oishi/Eiji fic! Granted, the lines are quite blurred in this one as to who is leading who in the relationship, but when I saw that pairing, I couldn't help but wonder how you were gonna pull off a seme!Eiji. I think you did a great job, though, in not necessarily assigning a role to either character.

And let me just tell you, the best line of this fic was in the second chapter. "Oishi, what should I do?" I don't think it was the line as much as it was the power behind it. The entire scene was set up magnificiently, and I could really feel the emotion behind those words (which is exactly why I loved it the best).

I was also quite amused by how much this fic resembled "Spring Haze." In many ways it was the exact opposite. Eiji's feelings for Oishi were so strong that he avoided him instead of wanting to always be near him. But I think the way he lashed out was similar, though Oishi being the confused one in this fic was awesome. You know I must be feeling serious love for you since I stayed up all night reading your fics. Lord knows I'll have to study for days to make up for it, but it was worth it. Keep up the good work hun! You make me squeal fangirlishly every time. ^^

So yeah, the end of this chapter reminded me of that scene in DL1, right after the Fuji/Eiji song, ya know? The part when it's raining and Oishi's like, "Don't you love me more than Fuji?" and Eiji pops out with his resounded "Un!" Well, maybe I changed the words up a little, but I think you know what I mean... ^__~

And the whole time, I kept thinking, "Play the martyr Oishi and you'll get outta this! Remember, Eiji smited you first!" Course, you resolved it like whoa, but Oishi TOTALLY could have gotten away with the martyr thing...

Off to read the next chapter. Bet you're tired of me now!

Darn you, you evil thing! Of course, being the avid fiction reader I once was, I knew that you'd throw in SOME kind of twist, since he was confessing and it was only the third chapter. But I didn't think of this! Guh, now I'll definitely get no sleep tonight. Why must you be so darn addictive?!

OMG!! do you know that I stayed up until 3 last night just so I could finish reading this?...but then I was too busted to review so...hem...I loved it. Ditch that, I adored it. It was amazingly well written, and if it's your first fic, then I really look forward to reading more coming from you in the future.

Aw the OishiEiji love is so CUTE! Thanks for the story!

-sniff sniff- I'm such a fangirl. I cried. -sniffles- A lot. Like, needed tissues a lot. And then just to reassure myself of GP love, I went and hugged my GP poster for 3 minutes.

You did a pretty good job with Oishi's POV... considering (I agree) that Eiji is a lot easier to write. Well, I imagine Eiji would be easier to write... I'll find out when I get around to writing my GP fic.

"He couldn’t stand seeing Eiji upset. Sometimes he resented Eiji’s cheerfulness, but he realized now how horrible it was to see him anything but happy. He had seen him frustrated, angry even, but this was different. If he didn’t know better he would say that he seemed depressed, but this was Eiji he was talking about. Whatever the situation, he could always count on Eiji to be smiling, oblivious."

I completely agree... that's what makes Eiji so lovable!

Yay, a well done Oishi/Eiji fic! Keep it up!

loved this one, too! you have a great talent for writing these two, and for conveying their emotions in a way that feels realistic and in-character. excellent work! my only con-crit is that although this is fairly common in anime, these guys say each other's names WAY too often. ;-) sometimes it's literally every line of dialogue. "oishi, (talk talk talk)," "eiji, (talk talk talk)," "oishi..." etc. but it's just a little thing, really, and doesn't distract from how much i really enjoyed this story. thanks for a great read, and keep up the stellar work!

Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. Utterly captivating; I couldn't stop reading. I really like the way you write for the Golden Pair. And I do love the angst. You write very beautiful angst.

You are an amazing writer! Keep it up!

Golden Pair forever!!

oh well i'm done reading. I like it. I've always love something "angsty" with a happy ending. Guess I'm different or weird. Although their fight became too long/draging, I love the extended ending. Happy moments should really be a bit longer after my efforts not to cry in the internet cafe. Its embarassing, you know. love eiji being sad because i can't really imagined him that way.

Clap, clap, clap! I really enjoyed your fic very much and it was so great to see Eiji and Oishi come together at the end. The kiss scene was just so sweet! Thankyou for sharing your incredible talent. I'm really looking forward to your next fic!