Awwww, it's sooo kawaii!

I forgot to tell you: The Old King, the Conquerer was King Jasson. I believe. King Jon also named one of his sons after him. It gets confusing.

That had better not be Alanna. I'm warning you.

Wow. Doesn't wanna leave? I'd leave and run away some where between home and the covent.

REALLY REALLY GOOD!

awwww...

great ending!

I love this story.. keep writing more.. PLEEASE

I love this story though it's really sad, and i think alan is a *&%&$F*)(() calling her a and a slut! If anyone deserves to be called that is him! I really think that roald and them are probably cute 2gether. ria

I LOVE IT! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS! GO WRITE MORE! NOW!

i loved it, themma sounded a lot like alanna, in another life. was this after or before jonathon? that was sooooooo cool!

Hey! great story! I like the First suitor's name, Fat-rond. Sorry, just thw way I am. Anyhow, like always, Keep writing!

I don't get it! Isn't Alan Alanna's twin brother? I didn't think he got married. He didn't, did he? Okay whatever if you don't want to stick to the original story that is your perogative but you're confusing me! When does Rodger come in?

If you mean Roger of Contè, brother of Roald, father of King Jonathan the third, his parents names were never mentioned. Tilea and Jonathan, or something to that effect would be great though. Please write more soon, I'll be looking for it!

That was very good! I really, really, really, really liked it! NOW WRITE MORE! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

Ohhhhhhh! keep writing or I'm gonna get really mad! )