This last chapter was quite a shock, but I guess I can see where they are coming from.
Thanks for writing and posting!

I loved it. I actually like the Brown/Jones pairing. I think it's sweet and cute. Is there going to be any more to this series?

Are Clark, Ross, and Greer characters from a game or some other spin-off, or your own characters, either fully-fleshed out or just a throwaway reference?

wwierd! but good

Good luck, Rebel Smith . . .

all three parts to these are good.

All in all, I love the series. I have to say though, I understand how you wrote Brown and Jone's love/relationship, I just didn't particularly like it. I like how the One is taking care of everybody, not just the people or the people and machines, but even the exiles too. The connection between the agents is something I hadn't though about before and I do like it. Are you going to write more?

Loved Smith's and the agents surprise when they found Brown and Jones!
Great ending! (any plans for a sequel?)

I liked that the key was designed so that only Smith could turn it. It's both very creative and also quite Matrix-like.

The Jones/Brown is a very nice surprise! I am glad of this turn of the plot, and I really appreciate that you chose to take this fic this way--with a thought for the exile programs, too. It's a lovely note to end on.

lol, should've known you would get naked agents into it somewhere!

Seriously, I loved it. Write more. Want sequel.

Glad you started up on this one again!

I am so glad that you updated this fic!

The Merovingian is really nicely drawn--very much in character, as are the twins. This is a quite interesting turn of the story indeed. I especially liked the way the Merovingian and Persephone quizzed Smith about who or what he really was, for some reason.

Bravo, Thesseli! Absolutely outstanding! A wonderful ending to a wonderful story.

It's funny how everything came full circle for Smith, isn't it? It took becoming human, in the guise of his sworn enemy no less, making peace with Morpheus, arriving at a truce with the Merovingian and finally coming to terms with his own emotional side by taking a cue from Jones and Brown for Smith to learn the greatest lesson of them all: the truest connection for human and AI alike is love.

Smithsbabe65

Thesseli, welcome back!

Great update, and it was worth the lengthy wait! The confrontation with the Merovigian was very well written. For once in his long, exiled existence, the Frenchman has been outwitted, it was perfect! I was hanging on every word, well done!

Now it's off to the foggy streets of London. What could be waiting for the One and his protectors? I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out. Keep up the good work!

Smithsbabe65

The Twins don't seem, to me, like people who would fight against peace. On the other hand, the Mero does.
My favorite characters are Smith and the Twins. If you cause too much trouble for any of them, I will delete you.