you fergot jack he also was in liberte and even helpt ram white the com remember he is my fave character you cant forget him

i like this. times change, people change...if there ever was a theme for tribeworld is that ii is ever changing. nice pov for ram. as for not liking amber, i appreciate your not imputing that personal opinion into the story as so many writers often do. it can ruin a perfectly good story when its obvious who the author loves and hates. a writer must be bias and embrace the characters they're writing about. cant wait to read more.

I really love the way you've portrayed Ram. He always seemed to be an underdeveloped character in Tribeworld. I wanted to see his character become more than what he was, and when they sailed away it seemed like they were really making progress with his character. I like what you did with it, though. Hate Amber. Wished she'd died way back on Eagle Mountain. But you're right. She's really the only one who would have approached him in that sort of situation. Good work.

The story was sweet. However, you did get the name wrong.

-Ramone Kingsley was his name-

Got it off of tribeworld dot com

I don't think he's OOC at all - I think it was perfect the way that you wrote it. Completely flawless - I'm adding this to my fave. Stories list.

I really liked this story. It almost broke my heart! Ram is my favorite character too! That's probably why I'm loving this story so much. If you could write more, that would be great!

fab one shot, well written, all that jazz

Oh no, it was far from bad. I had given someone a Ram/Amber challenge once actually- I actually kinda like this idea better in some ways. It's very different- and I've seen OOC tribe characters left and right it's not a big deal unless it's so stupid beyond point of reason but you would have to bend his character to actually make that fic. As for Amber, I don't like her either but Ebony wouldn't be that crazy to go down that path (or male path) twice. Shes more an one time move on person. So, overall it was pretty good. A nice different read from the usual.

I love this! Ram is my favorite character to. I can't wait to see what happens to him in the future episodes of The Tribe.

Loved it, other than a few grammatical mistakes that everyone makes, great work! hey, this would make a kool little beginning to a long story...hmm...maybe you should think about a sequel*did i spell that right?*.