Beautiful!

Intersting. I like it. Sounds like something Enjolras would say about Grantaire.

Hooray! Finally, a new submission. Well, I like the topic (heck, if R's in it, I'll have a

certain fondness for it LOL). Some stanzas seem a little forced, but the last three are

pretty nice. If you want to make it flow a little better, you could cut out the "ABAB"

rhyming pattern and try an easier one like "ABCB" - much simpler. My main complaint

is the seventh stanza - I think that could be cut altogether, as it's not essential anyway.

But it's good. I like some of the insights.

Hm. Poor Fearless Leader. I think this might work better as prose, actually; the rhymes are awkward.