arg... ish not done.. is gary gay? o_O;; yea, great... i respect you decision on not writing without emotion, and i agree that splashing words on a page is certainly a waste of time.. but i really want to know what happens. ^__^;

BEAUTIFUL~ thank you. you saved me from thinking that there were no good writers out there. i've just finished reading a ton of crap aamr fics and they drove me mad. they people are in character and you didn't forget about the pokemon, which is good, or else this fic wouldn't be in the pokemon section, now would it? nya~ so... yea, i'll just go ahead and read the next chapter now.

Wow. That was really awesome. The description and vocabulary was brilliant. Nice choice of title, too. I absolutely loved the 'river' scene.

I'm liking this one!! Keep going!!

Continue please, I am really enjoying reading this! I loved the chapter, it was, once more, beautifully writen and full of emotion! Bless ~Angie*

OMG! I can't believe I never got around to reading this when you uploaded it! I would of been missing the most beautifully, well writen piece of fiction ever. I am looking forward to reading the next part. Bless ~Angie*

Hey I can wait. Just glad that you decided to continue this. :) Great chapter!

*^_^* I'm glad you're continuing. I was lucky I saw ya on the just-in page though, cuz for some reason I forgot to stick you on aa...Don't worry! I'll do it this time! *^_^*; This is very good. I can't wait to find out what's going on with Gary, and what happens with all three of them at the end...or whatever...Geez, I'm tired...Oh well...Tat's all! *^_^*;;;

I really like this story so far! Please continue it. :-)

Nonnono...The lack of a "confession" scene is a GOOD thing. A VERY GOOD THING. I DON'T like confession scenes. THANK YOU. *^_^*;;;; Um...Eheh...well...This was good! Maybe I'm just in a sappy romanticy mood, but I liked it. *^_^* Ummm...Yup, tat's all. *^_^*;;;;

Hurry the &^£&%& up and get the next chapter up!!!!

Cool! I really liked it! :)

And when the second part will follow& I'm looking forward to reading it

I LOVED IT!!!! That was great!!! Please continue this! It would be funny to see Ash follow Misty around ^_^

When, the hell, are you going to write MORE?!?! This story is absolutly amazing, and you're not writing more chapters!!!! When you say 'if i get enough feedback', well, i think you've got enough already! PPPPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this story's so great-it made me laugh, and cry, and made me totally love-sick, i SOOOO want a boyfriend! lol!