I freaking LOVED the ending!

Nice!

lol cute and love da ending.. im makin dis review short... im tired of givin review to EVRY chapter and EVRY story... lol... i just feel i hav to... and if i make my review too short... i just feel i hav to make it long...*sigh*

lol! This...you have to cxontinue this, I am dead serious, and you love m/t too, if you haven't you must read Lady of Touya, I love that fanfic, it what got me involved in T/m! I love it, you must update!

it was great,but i always say that... i'm a really big meilin/touya fan! it would be nicer if it wasn't a one-shot but this is already good the way it is now!

the end part was pretty cracked...lol...very nicely done[even though, I'm more towards TY than TM]...

Fics like this are the reason that I am such an adive Meilin/Touya supporter. Anyhow, it's sweet and well written, even though the italicised words can be a little confusing to follow at times(I'm guessing they are Mei's thoughts?). As a one-shot... it begs for continuation. That of course it up to you, but please do keep that in mind.