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| Wendy Walker 2008-07-25 ch 1,  | abuseOh, I liked this! I thought their gifts were very well thought out, especially Miroku's. Loads of fun with that, I assume. And now Naraku has something to cheer himself up! He's such a grump, y'know? |
| KataangNutyBabe 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuse:) Heh. Very cute. I liked your predictions of the alternative universe, the usual humor buried in the dialogue, and the InuKag, of course. :) Doesn't even matter that it's almost June. |
| The Violent Tomboy 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseEpilouge's awesome. |
| JupiterRain44 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuselol! i loved the part about her spirit guide surely being an iguana. very cute! |
| Noname 2008-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseYour ending was very much creative and funny as hell! xD |
| ra 2008-03-16 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was really good! and the epilogue was so funny! |
| XFiercexxx 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abusemeheh loved this...hate family reunions...little brats runing around screaming? yeah not my cupotea i like how you kept them all IC its so damn hard writting kagome...anyways love the naraku parody-ness and yeah all the holiday ** is true thanks for the laugh (s) DH |
| Kipcha 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseHA! It was sweet and serious, and totally cute,but still the ending was hilarious! EXCELLENT WORK! Kipcha |
| brakken 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseROFLMAO...seriously I can't. stop. laughing. hehehehehehe... ok done. For the moment. Anyways, I have to say that I loved the idea for the story, (using the whole Dickens plot) how you portrayed Kagome, Miroku's gift, and most of all the epilogue. That's what had me laughing my face off, especially the last line, although I was smiling through the rest of the story as well- sometimes even Kagome can be ridiculously self-absorbed and petulant, and she was this time, and it was so great to read her interactions with her 'spirit guide'. The line about the online quiz telling her it should be an iguana was pretty rich too. Great job, and kudos to your creativity. |
| omasuoniwabanshi 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseToo funny. Liked the twist on Dickens' Christmas Carol, and Kagome's fiendishly clever 'gift' to Naraku in the end. |
| daydream14 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE the epilouge! Absoulutely brilliiant! |
| Brea 2007-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI tried to contain my laughter but the epilogue honestly wouldn't have it. Owie, the muscles in my stomach hurt now. *Thumbs up* |
| C.M. 2007-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL. The ending was great! Love it! =^^= |
| xXxTsukuyomixXx 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseAHAHAHAHAHAHA Nice ending! >. |
| aiko 2007-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseHahahaa... I love the epilogue...singing hamsters! ^-^ The story was kawaii. Loved it |