Interesting! I actually had to read word for word. Rare story that makes me do that. Good job.

Gainel and Daine, isn't it?

Gorgeous...who's the narrator? (My first thought was Kypiroth, but...)

im either stupid, or this doesn't allude all that well.

who are we talking about here?

kyprioth? badger god?( i know he's a badger..so?he has the right to fall in love and being as witty god he is...he can love daine...there's a possiblity don't you think?) kyprioth isn't it? cmon just get out with all the mystery *glare* anyways that was an astouding piece...whoever it is was, he/she was in character for a god...good job on it!

hew r u talkin abaut?

Wow. That takes my breath away. I love the writing style and the last line made a great ending.

The first thing I read from you in months, and it takes my breathe away. Simple and heartbreaking. I think I like this best out of a lot of your recent to semi-recent work. It's just...a perfectly expressed piece, and that's all I can say.