Nicely done. Good to see some non-angst from your writing of these two. ;)

Is hard to think they could’ve a peaceful vacation away from their problems, but not impossible as you seen here. Sure, they’re unique assassins that easily can get to the spotlight of the business, but I guess that’s something out of their minds at the moment.

Good job.

Beautiful. Don't have anything to critique about it. Perfectly paced and extremly descriptive. I loved it, but found one unimportant flaw. How did Kirika watch the sunrise and the sunset over the water? I didn't sound like a small island :)

Lovely and descriptive, nearly poetic in places. The Soldats section was a bit jarring, considering the peace of the earlier section, but the story was still wonderfully written.

Good job. Everything seems to fit perfectly. Keep writing!

Pretty. Nothing else to say. I like it a lot.

yay! another GREAT noir fic.^_^ and perfectly well written. you must really like noir, seeing all the fics you have for it. I just hope your love for noir continues so that all of us other noir fans can see more great fics.

Great piece. Just the right size, just the right flow and rhythm... I like the way you play with four senses, alternating between them to suit the mood of the character you follow : if I could read with my eyes closed, the words would probably make be actually _feel_ or _hear_ those things you describe.

As a matter of fact, the small snippet describing the encounter with Soldats representatives seems oddly out of place except as a trigger for Mireille's temporary nervousness. Unless this is a "first chapter" thing, of course, in which case you've caught me. But that's just an impression when I read and re-read it, the feeling that this part feels incomplete while the rest of the text is entirely self-contained, with an appropriate ending.

Anyway, congratulations for an excellent piece, as usual. If I ever find a way to make authoring capabilities transcend biological limits, I'll follow SpriteDust's suggestion :-P

Very nice. Leaves a really warm fuzzy feeling inside. ^__^
Looking forward to future updates.

When I am rich, I will quite happily pay you to continue writing Noir fanfic for the rest of your natural (and possibly scientifically-extendedly unnatural) life.

Every fic you write is like a perfect snapshot of a moment in Mireille and Kirika's life. I KNOW these people, in a way that I don't often know the Mireille and Kirika of many other fanfics. This also came at a time when I really needed to reconnect with this universe, and this fanfic was exquisitely perfect for doing so.

LONG LIVE LEET.

YES YES YES! This has everything I like about your writing. The small, the usual, the mundane, yet far so unusual for those two. This piece is your perfection Leet, no overflowering of expressions, reaching for nothing beyond what you can put into a text of this lenght, short yet with an impact, simple and so very very touching.

So human. Two people trying to collect, connect and living on from the shards and the truth they were left with. I love this, even more than Just Another Night. Here you can really and undoubtly feel that those two are finally -living-, not yet entirely free but finally on their own terms, to watch the sunset as it pleases them.

Excellent.

Another great Noir fic. I enjoyed it. Keep up the great writing.

I'm such a sucker for Kirika and Mireille that I'm so happy that I've flagged your name so that I can see your stories. Your doing much much better. The pictures you place in print are so vivid as if I'm there (smell the ocean, feel the breeze), how I miss those two.
I do have a comment on mentioning the wound a little more than required. It was if the readers were not paying attention (your assumption).
Thank you again...

Ohh, my friend, you know how to play to my Noir weakness. Just one little observation: the tendency to overuse adverbs. Try to rework your sentences a bit to avoid overusing the -ly words. Overall, it's wonderfully sentimental; as always I felt myself wanting more. So...more please? *G*

Beautiful, just like all your other fics. I realized near the end that I was smiling :) The title fits very well too, the mood was extremely peaceful. Great Job! I'll be waiting for more ;)

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