Reviews for When You Walk Away
Reprise 2/6/11 . chapter 1
Interesting.

I've found a good fic to read at long last.
larkey116 2/17/05 . chapter 15
Heh, an epilogue would be pretty cool. I'm sad to see this story end. :(

Congrats on your "first finished piece!" I lurved it! *gives plushie*
Soul's Eclipse 2/14/05 . chapter 15
Very cool.
Hearty-Chan 2/14/05 . chapter 15
(Cries) wah it's over. hehehehe thats was a cool ending though. Do I think you should do a squeal HELL YEAH make one please please please and I'll read it like my life depened on it (ok meybe not like that but I will read it)

bye bye for now

angelfrie
minamotogirl 1/30/05 . chapter 14
the results are coming! who will win! pleez updatez soon!
larkey116 1/28/05 . chapter 14
"...the winner is..."

Mai:...Well?...O_O o No!

*faints*

Great Scott, don't do that! I thought you were really

ending the story! (JK! It's okay!)

*jumps up and down* Yay, there's more to

come! *falls out of computer chair*

Ow...update when you can, please!
Soul's Eclipse 1/28/05 . chapter 14
YEAH! A COOKIE! UPDATE UPDATE!
Hearty-Chan 1/28/05 . chapter 14
ARGHGH YOU EVIL PERSON. don't scare people like that, Oh annd if you do one more cilffie oh bougus end like that my little friends shall get mad. And yay you used my lyics and teaked them again:) anyway write more please and if ya have any time check out my fanfic

bye bye for now

Angelfrie
time can take its toll 1/28/05 . chapter 14
Cookie...I would review even not for a cookie. Although now I will help myself to one. Thank you.

I'm sorry, I didn't read this chapter with as much attention as I could have; my head is filled with thoughts of snow tubing. Do you know how awesome it is to careen down a slope of fresh snow, getting powder in your afce and freezing your eyelashes together, while holding on to nothing but the tubes of people you've only known for ten minutes as your only support? Cause damn, it rawx! Just as this story does, but in a more adrenaline filled way, which fills my mind with thoughts of returning to the place.

Obsessed much?

A shoutout to Angelfire; awesome lyrics.

You and your evil clifies... I'm on the edge... hopefully I'll have a snow tube and some friends to go down with too. Nothing like freezing your ass off for the sake of an adrenaline rush.

-RAWK ON!
Hearty-Chan 1/24/05 . chapter 13
hey argh not a cliffe *pokes you until you write the next chapter* oh and If ya need them i got more lyrics for ya

confusoin

you yelled I yelled

you said it was my fault i said it was yours

but the truth is we're both to blame

you said I egged you on I said you egged me on

why our we fighting over somthing so smal

why are causing this confusion

Chorus

Stop this madness, stop this fight

no more agruing over who's wrong or roght

all were getting is chaos hurt and regret

I don't whant any more confusion

why must you fuss and fight

over the smallset things

we're both to blame

why can't we just say sorry

and go back to the beginning

why are causing this confusion

Chorus

Stop this madness, stop this fight

no more agruing over who's wrong or roght

all were getting is chaos hurt and regret

I don't whant any more confusion

so scram at me all you want

I won't take this it;'s gotta stop

no fighting no more pain

I know we can't go back but at least can we try

to stop all the confuseion

Chorus

Stop this madness, stop this fight

no more agruing over who's wrong or roght

all were getting is chaos hurt and regret

I don't whant any more confusion

Chorus

Stop this madness, stop this fight

no more agruing over who's wrong or roght

all were getting is chaos hurt and regret

I don't whant any more confusion
Soul's Eclipse 1/23/05 . chapter 13
Update! UPdate! UPDATE! *hunts around for head-shrinking device* Must update! Your head will be shrunk if you don't! *thinks* hm, maybe I should drill a hole through your skull and fish the contents of the next chapter out?
larkey116 1/22/05 . chapter 13
O.O'

Not a cliff hanger! It burns, too! ...ow!

Can't wait until next chappie. I am loving

this! Keep it up!
time can take its toll 1/22/05 . chapter 13
Damn the suspense... I want ANSWERS! Lol... update soon, really soon, before I explode in a shower of red sparkles and candy wrappers. Suspense does not float with me.

Well, I'd love to stay and review longer, but I'm roleplaying with a friend, and I don't want Riku to lose the battle. -RAWK ON!
minamotogirl 1/21/05 . chapter 12
great chapter! pleez update soon! lol i had to go on the comp cuz i got myself in trouble for playing my guitar too loud in my room. -_-'
Soul's Eclipse 1/20/05 . chapter 12
UPDATE!
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