| Reviews for When You Walk Away |
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Reprise 2/6/11 . chapter 1Interesting. I've found a good fic to read at long last. |
larkey116 2/17/05 . chapter 15Heh, an epilogue would be pretty cool. I'm sad to see this story end. :( Congrats on your "first finished piece!" I lurved it! *gives plushie* |
Soul's Eclipse 2/14/05 . chapter 15Very cool. |
Hearty-Chan 2/14/05 . chapter 15(Cries) wah it's over. hehehehe thats was a cool ending though. Do I think you should do a squeal HELL YEAH make one please please please and I'll read it like my life depened on it (ok meybe not like that but I will read it) bye bye for now angelfrie |
minamotogirl 1/30/05 . chapter 14the results are coming! who will win! pleez updatez soon! |
larkey116 1/28/05 . chapter 14"...the winner is..." Mai:...Well?...O_O o No! *faints* Great Scott, don't do that! I thought you were really ending the story! (JK! It's okay!) *jumps up and down* Yay, there's more to come! *falls out of computer chair* Ow...update when you can, please! |
Soul's Eclipse 1/28/05 . chapter 14YEAH! A COOKIE! UPDATE UPDATE! |
Hearty-Chan 1/28/05 . chapter 14ARGHGH YOU EVIL PERSON. don't scare people like that, Oh annd if you do one more cilffie oh bougus end like that my little friends shall get mad. And yay you used my lyics and teaked them again:) anyway write more please and if ya have any time check out my fanfic bye bye for now Angelfrie |
time can take its toll 1/28/05 . chapter 14Cookie...I would review even not for a cookie. Although now I will help myself to one. Thank you. I'm sorry, I didn't read this chapter with as much attention as I could have; my head is filled with thoughts of snow tubing. Do you know how awesome it is to careen down a slope of fresh snow, getting powder in your afce and freezing your eyelashes together, while holding on to nothing but the tubes of people you've only known for ten minutes as your only support? Cause damn, it rawx! Just as this story does, but in a more adrenaline filled way, which fills my mind with thoughts of returning to the place. Obsessed much? A shoutout to Angelfire; awesome lyrics. You and your evil clifies... I'm on the edge... hopefully I'll have a snow tube and some friends to go down with too. Nothing like freezing your ass off for the sake of an adrenaline rush. -RAWK ON! |
Hearty-Chan 1/24/05 . chapter 13hey argh not a cliffe *pokes you until you write the next chapter* oh and If ya need them i got more lyrics for ya confusoin you yelled I yelled you said it was my fault i said it was yours but the truth is we're both to blame you said I egged you on I said you egged me on why our we fighting over somthing so smal why are causing this confusion Chorus Stop this madness, stop this fight no more agruing over who's wrong or roght all were getting is chaos hurt and regret I don't whant any more confusion why must you fuss and fight over the smallset things we're both to blame why can't we just say sorry and go back to the beginning why are causing this confusion Chorus Stop this madness, stop this fight no more agruing over who's wrong or roght all were getting is chaos hurt and regret I don't whant any more confusion so scram at me all you want I won't take this it;'s gotta stop no fighting no more pain I know we can't go back but at least can we try to stop all the confuseion Chorus Stop this madness, stop this fight no more agruing over who's wrong or roght all were getting is chaos hurt and regret I don't whant any more confusion Chorus Stop this madness, stop this fight no more agruing over who's wrong or roght all were getting is chaos hurt and regret I don't whant any more confusion |
Soul's Eclipse 1/23/05 . chapter 13Update! UPdate! UPDATE! *hunts around for head-shrinking device* Must update! Your head will be shrunk if you don't! *thinks* hm, maybe I should drill a hole through your skull and fish the contents of the next chapter out? |
larkey116 1/22/05 . chapter 13O.O' Not a cliff hanger! It burns, too! ...ow! Can't wait until next chappie. I am loving this! Keep it up! |
time can take its toll 1/22/05 . chapter 13Damn the suspense... I want ANSWERS! Lol... update soon, really soon, before I explode in a shower of red sparkles and candy wrappers. Suspense does not float with me. Well, I'd love to stay and review longer, but I'm roleplaying with a friend, and I don't want Riku to lose the battle. -RAWK ON! |
minamotogirl 1/21/05 . chapter 12great chapter! pleez update soon! lol i had to go on the comp cuz i got myself in trouble for playing my guitar too loud in my room. -_-' |
Soul's Eclipse 1/20/05 . chapter 12UPDATE! |