 Pam 2006-11-10 . chapter 1 please do another chapter!! It would be cool if Sasuske arived to finde the vilagers giving Naruto a hard timeand forced him to reavaluate Naruto! |
 Nameless 2006-08-27 . chapter 1 Finish it beatrice. Finish it. It was good. |
 Nariko 2006-06-27 . chapter 1Hiyo tis Stephie here after reading your fic! I think it's the first time I read a yaoi involving a kiss and I didn't mind it the slightest bit! Well, I guess you could say I'm improving ^.^ I liked it, too. Good job. |
 ischade 2006-01-07 . chapter 1 I loved it. I would love a sequel. You know, as soon as I saw the title of your story, I thought about the song. And it fits so well with the story. And they are a lot in character:) Keep writing:) |
 black vapor 2005-09-18 . chapter 1Sasuke seemed out of character until that "I'm a better kisser" part. But overall I liked it. It's one of those stories that you could write more to if you ever felt so inclined. |
 Past Illusions 2005-09-05 . chapter 1so kawaii!! the ending is great, why must this be a oneshot... (whines...) |
 prettypriestess 2005-07-12 . chapter 1*squee!* i loved the ending ^^ |
 kuro neko 2005-01-05 . chapter 1 am a big naruto fan and i think this is great and u should write more i encourge u to write so plz, do update |
 Little Fuji 2004-12-27 . chapter 1It's uber cute!! XD And I think this is better as a one-shot. ^^;; |
 LadyRed06 2004-12-26 . chapter 1I love it seguiwl! |
 Mizu 2004-12-26 . chapter 1 Cute! |
 bhodi li 2004-12-26 . chapter 1i think it was a good beginning to a story where Sasuke has to find that his path is not set in stone and laid out before him and if he doesn't realize it he will lose Naruto from his life and also make that Sakura wench suffer at it too. Heck ya ! go for a sequel! |
 Vicadin-Tea 2004-12-26 . chapter 1Actually, its nt bad... but is a wall with holes termed 'holy'?? Hahaha, maybe you could do a sequel where they proceed to more X-rated stuff & compete who's better...?? XD |
 Tunazap 2004-12-25 . chapter 1:3 Oh so cute!! Loved it loved it! |