SO CUTE!

that was awesome. continue please and don't make it slash. anyway, awesome!!

it is awsome! write more plz?!?!?!?!?!

Sweet!

I would love it if you made it slash (if you continue). This was a nice little fic and hopefully you continue.

Thanks Kel! that was so sweet of u and a very sweet and moving story. Thank you! I completley loved it:D

I think you should write more. I like the Remus/Harry but ther family-kind-of-love would suit this story better.

That was so sweet. I liked the way Remus called Harry "Cub" and Harry called Remus "Moony". It's good to see Harry talking so openly with Remus, especially since their relationship is kind of formal in the books and Harry feels closer to Sirius than to Remus. Continue, but no slash please. I can't stand slash.

so sweet... i think you should continue. but no slash. i like slash, but this would be cool as a kind of like, fatherish sonish thing.

That was a really sweet fic, very well-written with the detail and emotions and stuff...very good! Yes, I think you should post another chapter but not do slash...but that's just my opinion...you're the author and you've got the power! :D
Anyways, I absolutely love it!
~~Crimsonphoenix1

Tears were falling fast now and e made no move to wipe them away.

there should be a h in front of the "e"
and i though i told
needs to be a t

Hey kelly i really like this story i would just leave it as it is it's simple but sweet and thank you i really do like the story

Ack! Is tough to vote on this one...Is so sweet as is, and trying to take it to a slash would probably kill this oneshot.. Even If I love the pairing. So no slash.

But write another that has a better lead-off for slash, and take that one to slash! YeahYeah!XD
~Tigris

i say definitely write more. it's a great start to something. and i say slash if just for the fact that therearen't enough harry/remus and it's my fav slash pairing.

You should definitly write more, this could be a great start to a father/son story. No slash please :D

~Sexy Black

sweet yet sad