 Bob 2005-01-05 . chapter 4 Lovely and mushy! Just what the holiday season calls for. |
 the-faith-less-one 2005-01-02 . chapter 4That was amazingly sweet.
Thank you.
Have a great 2005, filled with happiness, okay?
Angel. |
 jade-angel5 2005-01-01 . chapter 4Lovely...a real Christmas treat. And your english is just fine. Many thanks for a great little story! |
 Kyre 2005-01-01 . chapter 4Aww! What a great Christmas present for Max and Logan. :) |
 Kyre 2005-01-01 . chapter 3Am I the only one who cheered when Max called Logan a moron? He's acted like one so many times it felt good to hear her call him on it for once! lol. The fact that she said it with affection makes it even better. *eagerly turns to next chapter* |
 Kyre 2005-01-01 . chapter 2"She had already seen herself climbing the stairs; not that it would have been hard work, but she was getting lazy."
Hee!
I'd like to see Logan with snow in his hair...yum.
Logan's really good with kids for a guy who doesn't spend much time around them. I like his thoughts about having kids; often when reading fic it's easy to forget that Logan and Val were married and maybe considering children. (At least it is for me, lol.) Glad Logan shared with Jason the fact that he knew what a Christmas without parents was like--and that he knows it'll get better. |
 Kyre 2005-01-01 . chapter 1I like this. Logan, caught up in his efforts to ignore the holiday, doesn't think about the effect missing a holiday is having on the kids--until Max points it out. Love the way his fear of failure at keeping his charges safe comes out in a burst.
"He knew he sometimes reacted cold and pushed her away, and every single time he wished he could make it undone. She didn’t deserve it. And still he couldn’t help himself. It was just a reaction, based on all his shortcomings and fears."
This is definitely Logan, lol. |
 orca589 2004-12-31 . chapter 4Kept 3 and 4 to rad together and did today New Years even Shipping nice lifted the depression I always feel at this time and especially what has happened to friends in Asia.
Liked the bed scene and the Christmas morning.
I'll keep writing if you will LOL M/L all the way |
 idlehands452 2004-12-31 . chapter 4 excellent story, i was needing a fluffy M/L piece. happy new year and i hope to see something by you as well. keep up the great work! |
 Zassa 2004-12-31 . chapter 4That was fast - Love your story, you manage to create a very nice Christmas atmosphere. I think this is your best story so far – and yes, I have read them all. |
 Zassa 2004-12-30 . chapter 3That was nice - I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
 pirategrrl 2004-12-30 . chapter 3*happy sigh* just the right thing to cheer me up after all the tsunami news. thanks for dedicating your story to the victims, i hope that'll keep the positive vibes coming. i'm still waiting for a friend's answer, he shouldn't have been that close to phuket when the wave hit but he's on vacation with his family in thailand, so you never now.
thanks again, i'm looking forward to the next update! x |
 BlueAngel137 2004-12-30 . chapter 3Wonderful story!
I love the comfortable atmosphere you created - very well written. The Max/Logan interaction was really sweet (just what I needed to start my day, LOL) and you did a great job writing the kids.
Please hurry up with the next chapter!
THANKS. |
 GingerSnap 2004-12-29 . chapter 3 This is a perfect little story. Not just because of the time of the year, but when things get bad on our planet we need smooshy stuff.
Thanks for your great writing. |
 idlehands452 2004-12-29 . chapter 3 well what are you waiting for? come on... out with it! man, this chap rocked, i can't wait for more. keep up the awesome work and update soon! |