harry gets beatan, harry gets kidnapped , harry gets cursed.why is your harry so worthless... kill him and be done.

that was really good. nice job. I'll have to read the story that goes to this, the one where Snape views harry's memories. keep up the good work.

Hi! I love your story! It's so great, and the raltionship between Harry and Snape is so sweet and slow.
Althought, I'm french and I can't help but laugh at your poor translation of "Cacher apparence vrai" for what you probably mean "Hide true appearance" in english. Sorry to say your french is really dreadful ^^ and "cacher apparence vrai" means absolutly nothing, lol. I'm not being mean or I'm not trying to ridicule you but internet translator are stupid. If you want you can say "cacher la vrai apparence" but it's still not really idiomatic. So something like "masquer le vrai visage" or better: "masquer la véritable apparence." Anyway, as far as I am in the story, I love it. Great job, and bip me if one day you need help in french. LOL. ^^

That was great. One of the best Harry Severus relationship I've seen.

Great.

That was an awesome story! It was so sweet and touching! :D!

Where's chapter 1?

Absolutely wonderful story! Although I'm a bit confused. WHy'd Harry leave his last name Potter? Anywho, awesome job!

The whole story was wonderful I loved it. And I hope to read more of your Harry Potter stories. Please keep up the great work.

Very very good story. I love it. I read it in one night. That how good it is. Keep up the great work.

Just got done with chapter 12 and realize I have not written a review yet. The is a wonderful story. The reason I did not get a review out is because I had to get to the next chapter. Your story is that good. Please keep up the great work.

Wow just wow not in a bad way this is good

One itty bitty note. You said Occlumency lessons were at 7:30 right? So Harry has that panic attack and runs off, Lupin comes and then they go shopping? For several hours? Was he shopping until 11:00 or something? It just seemed a little rushed that's all...

Thank you! That was a really good fic - like all my favourite types of fic all rolled into one! It was exactly what I needed to read so THANKS!

Couple of things which were a bit ennoying though...(just HAD to bring these up, being the party pooper I am! sorry!)

I just think it's a bit too fast pace at times where you're not putting enough detail in and the spelling and grammar is a bit odd at some points...although by the looks of it, most of that seems to be caused by trying to get it out as quickly as possible!

Despite that, it was GREAT!
~Cowabunga

A wonderful story. Harry had to suffer a lot, but it turned out well. Thanks for writing such a long and well written story.