Love this story! "Little brothers should not be allowed"...how true ;)

Ah, so that's how it all started. Haha, what a wonderful idea! That's absolutely fabulous, that is. Wow, I'm actually immensely entertained.

THANK YOU!

Peace,

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I have never seen this before. How did I not know this was here? Albus is wonderful and it's all there: the sweets obsession, his sense of honor, the annoying little brother.

I loved the little throwaway line about the fox-fur stole. It lets you know you're in a magical world, but it's nothing significant to Albus.

You've done such a wonderful job of including everything in a subtle way so it just feels right. No anvils here. And the ending, with the kitten? And his signing his name? Perfect!

I found that quite entertaining, and very realistic. Not to mention, just so ALBUS DUMBLEDORE XD

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Lalala, cute story. So that's where her cat obsession started... eh.

Excellent characterization.

That was great! Really novel, and I LOVED the way Albus kept his promises - not stealing AND sending a prezzie. Brilliant idea, very well executed...cor, what a refreshing change!

Aw..Alchemine my friend, what a sweet little ficlet _ Alberforth is precious, and it was cute how Albus acted like a teacher already in correcting his grammer. LOL Very Nice.