A great story. Very good.

Wow! What an amazing beginning.
*Does Qui-Gon face* I forsee you will become a great Jedi FanFic writer.
Beware though: Not updating is a path to the Dark Side of the FanFic.
It's really great to see an original story line turn up.
You've got me absolutley hooked, so i hope you'll consider coming back to this story one day - i think it's definately worth it!

that was really just chilling. its a really freaky thought that someone might 'put down' a fellow human being, but i suppose that is what happend in the concentration camps.
this is a really interesting fic, and i would love to see more, even though i know it is unlikely because you haven't updated in so long.

This story is really original, I know you started it some time ago but I really hope you do another few chapters.

Awseome,totally engaging story line. PLZ update i want to read more

Great story, unique, intriguing. Hope you write more.

UPDATE! Umph! I love this story, great originalty points.

Very Angsty and interesting, and sad, and ...

Too much sugar...

Sorry, I liked it, it was sad, and...well it was good, keep it up!!

One request-- could you start writing the character's names properly? Like-- Obi-Wan with the caps on the last half-- same with Qui-Gon.

Other than that, it's an interesting AU story. I'll keep reading, when I find time. I know what's happening, anyway... mwhaha.

Do a favor, and explain how Anakin became Qui's apprentice too. Oh well, that's that, really. MTplotBWY!

-Eowyn Skywalker

My, my, this is fascinating. There are a lot of Obi-Wan angsts out there, but all the best ones seem to have a flavour of their own, and I think you've succeeded in that with your style of writing. I'd really like to see this fanfic develop.

Don't stop there, keep going (bounces eagerly in chair).

Great story, imagery is great as I already have this pictured in my mind.

Very interesting story so far. Your writing is gripping and makes me want to know what will happen next. I guess the fact that I love the main character also helps. Can't wait for your update!

I like it a lot! Very original!

ooh! i can't wait to see what happens!

Yay! This is a wonderful start to a story!

Keep up the good work!

I for one will be waiting!