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DRACULA ES EVIL! HE MUST DIE!

ME LIKEY VELKAN! LEAVE VELKAN ALONE,EVIL PEOPLE!

In a word: Brilliant. There's not much more I feel I can say

(reads the last paragraph,blows a fuse about poor Velkan's transformation) DAMN YOU,DRACULA!

POOR VELKAN!(God he is hot!)

wow...that was so cool...me and my sis are making a story like this but don't worry if i do anything that is going to reflect on you...i'll do a diclaimer...hope you like our story when it comes out

-Cittygurl-

wow, i loved it! i love anna\gabriel pairing. "the sensation of kissing her was overhelming"-i loved this phrase.:)

anyway, why dont you try to write another anna\gabriel story, about their wedding, first night, honeymoon, childbirth and etc?

Wow! 40 chapters in one day...great story so far, i really love it. So far this is one of the few decent Van Healsing stories i've read...keep up the awesome work, and i'll try and finish reading this story tomorrow after school and work.

-FFAMasquerade2005

WONDERFUL ENDING! I loved it! I think Im going to start the sequal later tonight or tomorrow though, brilliant anyways! )

She grinned “Then we can make money predicting the future…personally I’m going to write star wars and sue George Lucas for copy write, because technically I wrote it first.”

HAHA! Wow, Now that would be the greatest accomplishment ever! ) And Anna's pregnant! OMG! This is such a good story, THe reason I read this story is because when I was browsing throught the Van Helsing fics, I found your sequal and noted that it was a SEQUAL so I decided to read this one first, and honostly, WHO WOULDNT? Its so good! ) Ok, Im going to read the last chapter and then onto your sequal! tee hee. )

I loved the chapter! Filled with so much friendship bonding and unfullfilled relationships. hint hint: Sarah and Tony. I also think Marston should find someone for himself in the end. Gosh I have to keep reading to know what else happens and if they ever return home )

I think you did the chapter fine! I just feel pity for all of Sarah's friends for having to go through this, but I suppose Sarah is probably in the worst case scenario. Well I must continue to read because your story is doing wonders to my mind and damage to my eyes from lack of sleep )

Wow. That was a great chapter. I loved it. Im happy for Sarah that she gets to go back, but I feel sorry for Dracula a little bit, because you know he's actually human now, but he has to get all the punishment for his previous crimes. *sniffles* Your such a great writer! )

Im on the verge of tears! That was the saddest chapter Im yet to read. Im guessing that they're in some mixed up place betwee Earth and Hell? Perhaps, anyways, I think this was actually one of my favorite chapters, but it was really sad...

YAY! *jumps for joy* Sarah is alive! and Dracula is dead ( I knew you were going to kill him, but Im still in denial at the true monster he really is...*sighs* I love it so far, and will continue to read! Tee hee. xD

OMG! Tony and Sarah can't die! I seriously hope that none of the peoples die! xD