Oh wow, this was terribly dark, but I loved it.

Lol i love it! I too love to torture the uke, especially if it's Naruto

Don't end it yet! Pwease! I'll take it over if you want! It's too good XD

Tht was a good stry but isn't it supposed to be narusasu n not sasunaru ? sry I just have to point it out xD

umm..the actual stry was ok thi :)

Love the story, well written and all, but it should probably be under 'sasunaru' instead of 'narusasu' in the description, because the seme always comes first! Well done with the story tho!

WOW. O_O SUPER HOT AND SEXY I LUV IT X3

NO! SASUKE WHAT DID YOU DOO!

I dont get it? when he said he unleashed the demon on afull moon but it was still good.

That was...very graphic o.O

But it was interesting. You describe things very well...Almost too well.

WOW, this was something else. But god work though TT TT

OMG, it was great! I'm so into ukes being abused and stuff like that, too! I've written...6 or 7 scenes where Naruto was raped by the following, 2 of Itachi, 1 of Jiraiya, 1 of Kiba, 2 of Orochimaru, 1 of gang rape, 1 by Sasori, and a semi-rape by...I think it was Kabuto...I lost it. Surprisingly, I haven't posted any of them...oh yeah! there was actually three by Orochimaru...forgot my AU one for a second there, lol. So that totals up to...9 1/2 scenes of Naruto being raped! I feel so content now! I love'd how Sasuke lost control, not many people can write good rape scenes where the rapist loses control...bastards...lol. Anyways, love'd it, glad to have come upon it!

Lilia

I too get a weird pleasure when the ukes are beaten and abused...somethings wrong with my head. Anyway, great story...if you're adding anything to it, tell me! (I'll put it on alert just incase ;) )

wow.

yay! yaoi! xD

aww poor naruto...

but that was hot! nice job.

That was really iteresting I'm not sure how to put it. Maybe I'll know what will happen to Naruto then and will Sauske get caught. I can't wait to read more though and I hope it is soon.