 corset-rebellion-follower 2008-02-09 . chapter 19Aw, this was so cute! I never would have thought of this pairing! Great job! |
 bdlywrttn 2006-12-18 . chapter 19Yay! finished! and in one day too!
I applaud you, this was an awesome idea, and I enjoyed it very much.
I'd very much like to, with your permission of course, maybe put a bit of MaZazuness in a sequel to my fic, if/when I do make one.
All in all, very cute, very good. What more can I say? Adding to favorites. :-D |
 bdlywrttn 2006-12-18 . chapter 15yay, glad he's turned around. |
 bdlywrttn 2006-12-18 . chapter 10Sorry I'm commenting so much on a completed story, but I fear if I don't I may explode. lol.
Lots of people don't think they're good at writing emotion, you're better than you think. |
 bdlywrttn 2006-12-18 . chapter 7told you he would flip out. :D
Continuing the fact that Timon is afraid of love changing things.
But I'm thinking he might freak out some more. |
 bdlywrttn 2006-12-18 . chapter 6man, they're really cute, Maybe even cuter than Timon and Myla.
I tried my best to to cute it up too much with them, you could over-do it with those characters and it would seem corny.
With Ma and Zaz though, it works.
Now on the ne next chapter! |
 bdlywrttn 2006-12-18 . chapter 3I just breezed through 3 chapters, and already I love this!
The idea is beyond cute. While I love Zazu and Binti from Narfy's Memiors Of a Bluebird, and I like the name I made up for Ma (Kavie since Julie Kavner does her voice), I really like this idea too.
and I bet...Timon...is...gonna...flip...out!
I love Timon. :-) |
 MorpheusDreamer 2005-08-26 . chapter 2Hi Pichooi!
Sorry, this isn't a very late review, it's a thanks for reviewing "Rafiki's Tales"... see the epilogue I've just uploaded to see why I'm doing this...
I’m so glad Imani was effective for you… I think you might like the end of the epilogue… K&K at last have their love back… but as to developments with V&C… and T&P… wait for “Evening”…
Mind you, without an e-mail address for you I'll soon run out of chapters I haven't reviewed of yours for thanks!
MorpheusDreamer |
 Lily 2005-08-23 . chapter 19 I know what a perfect sequel might be to "never too old, never too different"... Remember Makalo and Kande? Since they were mentioned so little in this story I thought in the sequel the primary plot might be that somehow their parents died and then Zazu and Maha adopted them and then later on in the story they find a lost baby bird and decided to adopt it? Think about it, zazu finally has an adopted son of his OWN species and loves him to death! Only to find out it's the long-lost son of the new major-domo bird and his mate of Pride Rock! Call this sequel , "Wings of Change" since life changed for zazu and all... And then a new "threat" at pride rock comes, who might just be the SAME lion that killed Makalo and Kande's parents! It could be a lion that Simba or Nala knows or something to add spice to the story! Hope I gave u some ideas! Good luck! |
 Nala5 2005-08-17 . chapter 19Yay!
I finally got to it!
Sorry about that.
You know I always appreciate your reviews!
Anyways, that ending was soo sweet!
"I don't have to call him Dad do I?"
hehe
That was funny!
I'm amazed that Timon finally gave in.
So Zazu and Ma are mates!
hehe
Now that's certainly different.
I loved this story though!
I hope you write more fics soon.
Yur a really good writer!
Rafiki is really... into his little Upendi thing isn't he?
It's so strange and neat seeing Zazu leave the Pridelands like that.
hehe
That thing with Kovu and the morning report still makes me laugh!
I thought the whole thing with Nala's cubs was cute!
Can't wait to see what ya do next!
I look forward to your reviews, they're always interesting to read.
See ya around the net!
Lata |
 Maran Zelde 2005-08-12 . chapter 19Aw, how cute! I had been hoping that Zazu would decide to go with Ma. The conversation between Zazu and Rafiki was good; I especially like the part where Rafiki throws him off Pride Rock!
I hope you think of another story idea, whether it's a continuation of this one or something completely different.
P.S. I'm about halfway through writing chapter 3 of "The Search for Timon." |
 jla2snoopy 2005-07-19 . chapter 19wow. its done! no!
ya know, when i first read the summary, i thought, well, this is going to be interesting. but it actually turned out to be a story i really enjoyed. i loved your cute lines. i also loved rafiki's conversation with zazu! i absolutely loved that line "no need to be so violent." i especially am looking forward to seeing a sequel from you of this story. well, until then, see ya! and if you do decide to do a sequel, you can be sure i'll be reading it.
happy writing! |
 jla2snoopy 2005-07-19 . chapter 17yay! another update! great story. i just love this part:
NO! I NEED TO LIE DOWN NOW!
update soon! |
 MorpheusDreamer 2005-07-19 . chapter 19*Wipes away tear of joy*
Oh, it's so wonderful to get such a blissfully happy ending, truly the best couple and really reflects the title...
Sorry it took so long for me to review by the way, having problems...
Please, please write another story as soon as possible, this was just wonderful! |
 Took-Baggins 2005-07-18 . chapter 19*bouncing off the walls due to sheer joy*
i'm so happy! i'm so happy! i LOVE happy endings!
better than that, i love LOVE! and i LOVE a good story! let me tell ya, Pichooi, i'm so glad i decided to read this in spite of it being Ma/Zazu, cause not only was it a good story, it was a great story!
*standing ovation!!*
i can't wait to see what you come up with next! |