It was lovely. Haven't got the exact feelings they share though... Is it just friendship and is the kiss the result of ignorance ? Are they in love ? I'm a bit confused (and tired too...)!

Slash ROCKS!

Cutely written. The dialogue was interesting, very emotive.

That sucked major ass. You put too many words in it, and not enough action. Maybe, with some work, it could be half decent. The whole opening practically put my lazy @$$ to sleep.

Constrctive Criticism.

aw, that is so cute! i love it!