It was lovely. Haven't got the exact feelings they share though... Is it just friendship and is the kiss the result of ignorance ? Are they in love ? I'm a bit confused (and tired too...)!

Slash ROCKS!

Cutely written. The dialogue was interesting, very emotive.

That sucked major **. You put too many words in it, and not enough action. Maybe, with some work, it could be half decent. The whole opening practically put my lazy @$$ to sleep.

Constrctive Criticism.

aw, that is so cute!! i love it!