Wow. I liked it. Write more!

it was good

Too cute! Aw... Haa-san's afraid of the dark! *gives him a big hug* Keep up the good work, and loved the cute story!

Hatori's afraid of the dark! Hatori's afraid of the dark!

Something new, I liked it. ^^

Hahahaha! I luv this ficci! I bet u know why... :) Make more fic like this Riyuji-sensei!

Aw, so cute! I really like your writing style, it makes everything flow together so nicely.

I was a bit confused about the flash-back, it just wasn't very obvious that there was one, or something... or maybe you intended it that way?

*shrugs*

Anyway, that was really cute. I love cute stories, especially with Hatori Shigure and Ayame. It's so cute seeing them all together (in a non-yaoi sort of way). They remind me of my cousins...

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*This portion of my review is for your fic "Shut Up".*

I tried to leave a review where I should have, but my computer messed up and for some reason, said that I already left a review. I'm pretty sure that it didn't get through, so I'll put it here! And even if you did get it, you'll just get two reviews! :)

Well, I thought you did a really good job. Your writing seems to flow a little better here than in your "Only Human" story. I don't know why, it just works more or something.

I thank you much for the cute story, :) there aren't many good KaguraKyou stories out there. Heck, there aren't many KaguraKyou stories, period.

I'd say you did a wonderful job keeping them in character, too many people have that very low on their 'list of important qualities in a story'. For some reason...

Very very nice. I'll have to check out some more of your fics, and some of your friends fics too!

Keep up the good work!

-Kinkosami

Hatori was very IC, dont worry this is a gr8 story! One thing, Hatori doesnt have a mom, sorry well at least i dont know but i'm guessing he hasnt since at least elementary school k? GR8 story!
-Piper

That's so like Gure-san... Such a nice rainy-day fic.

Great story. Shigure seemed to enjoy himself, at least. Hatori...not so much. Especially if Akito was only pretending to be asleep. He would SO do that. I wonder if Hatori could erase Akito's memories...leave him a shell but alive so the next leader wouldn't be born yet...but that'd be mean...yet he deserves it, doesn't he?

Good fic. It's becoming more and more of a challenge to find non-Yaoi friendship stories and this does a nice job of demonstrating that oh-so-rare genre! Well written and highly original! ^_^

I'M BACK! see the things i do for you? as soon as i get home i get onto the computer and review...! and i haven't even talked to you on the phone yet!

um. right. :D

actually, yes. Takaya-sensei might have been good friends with the Com. Gosh, i can just SEE the insanity sprouting from there. Like Kyou appearing in Cat's Trail somehow...all right, i'll review already!

“WAKEY-WAKEY, HATORI!” --> Do it to Wielder one day! PLEASE! *gets thwapped by wielder* yes, i knew this line existed, but i still laughed out loud when i read this. easy to amuse, after all.

“Don’t tell me you didn’t expect something like that?”

Yes, knowing me, I really would, but I really, really, really, really, really wanted to know how he ended up there in the first place.

-> so...you. and so shigure.

in fact, the whole freaking thing is so you and so shigure. Geez, remind me to watch out if i get into a blackout with you.

“It’s not my fault. I’m only human, Shigure. All humans are afraid of something at one point or another.” --> oh yeah, i know where that came from! XD *gets thwapped again*

Love this, Yuji. Everyone's in character. Geez, Shigure has been able to keep from telling Aya? XD oh, and Hatori knew what he was talking about right away! Which means...Shigure keeps rubbing it in. ^_^

go you! write more!

i know this is long. so blame me. i'm having fun.

bai bai!

In the flashback thingie, I don't think Akito would have been old enough at that time to care, unless Shigure and Hatori are, like, seventeen but I got the impression they were somewhere between 7 and 10. Maybe as old as twelve.

Anyway, this was good, Hatori has to fear something and it's fun to tease everyone's favorite Dragon. It was rather believable, kudos.

~Lockea~

X3 That was kawaii. Aw -thinks of Ha'ri-kins being a-scared of the dark. I will give him a night light for his next birthday ^^

Evil...

EVIL...

Yes, YOU are EVIL. And the worst part is, I actually like this story (despite the very obvious message it holds).

Nope, I don't think Hatori was OOC. The dialogue is very believable. Praise the dialogue!

I got an idea from reading this. A possible-story-type of idea. I'll make no promises, though.XP You know how I am with ideas. They come and go like the wind... Haha.

Evhal! Evhal! Evhal! No other words describe it as accurately as that! Oh yes, and you may want to fix this line: “Do you really want me to tell the publishing company about all your embarrassing stories since you were four?” to "Do you really want me to tell the publishing company all the embarrassing things that had happened to you since you were four?" Or something like that at least.XP

Great job, Yuji-tama! You deserve a long review so here's one!

nice work YUji :D hahaha
it was worth my time reading this ;) hahahaaha
wala lang, what can i say ba? I like all of riyuji's works eh...
oy, write Valdrast! im reminding you na!
Oy, everyone read all of riyuji's works cuz they're really nice ah! And review them :D