oh my god! this is one of the most amazing one-shots-no, scratch that-STORIES i've ever read! its amazing! i cant even tell you how much i love it! it is so powerful, so real. its just...wow.

amazing job!

*Skye*

o, nice little twist... don't see that too often... and like how the hole thing is told around the clock... keep it up!

Its really sad, a good fic but sad.