wow! HEY this is A GREAT story! please update soon.

ps. I noticed you last update was in 2007!? If you are planning to discontinue then reconsider! this is great stuff! Is it yzak x Miriallia? interesting couple, love it!

Wow, I can't believe I haven't read this before now...It's absolutely adorable, not to mention highly amusing. What I like most, however, is your ability to make my own heart skip a beat during those few "moments" Dearka and Miriallia have. A truly wonderful fic, and interesting plotline. Can't wait to see where this goes in the future!

ok, i confess
i only read the part with shiho in it
are you really going to pair yzak with miriallia? o_O
that would be just weird, i tell you

when will you update?? i read this chapter a lot more carefully, and saw you added shiho in it...and that she missed yzak by like seconds
so when will you update? PLEASE SAY YOU WILL!

Nice ^_^ update soon.

Sorry for the delay :P I'm in Disney World/Universal right now with the fam ^_^

I loved the new chapter. I missed having Dearka around a bit though, but I loved how her new bodyguards took Yzak down a peg with who's job it was to protect her right now ^_^

There were a few typos and misused words, but nothing that you couldn't read through and understand what you were trying to communicate to everyone. (Been there, done that a million times on my end too) ^_-

Great job and I'm sorry that I haven't written in so long. I've been so bogged down from the kids and work that I barely have time to breathe. :P

Lots of hugs and don't forget to bring Dearka in again soon ^_^ I really miss him!

And more hugs, since it's been so long and you deserve them!

lol I love your title; very catchy.

hi! this is my first time reading this fic, and i'll be honest i was only interested b/c i thought shiho was in it, and i also wanted to see the whole Mir Yzak connection.
i was a bit disappointed that after reading it all, shiho was not in it, but i'll wait and see the later chapters. lol, i know everyone says i'm an obsessed shiho freak...and i guess i am!!
i thought everything else was well-done, even this chapter despite the fact that you don't seem to think it's that great. I kept forgetting which OC was who but i think that's only because i read it all at once, and haven't read one chapter at a time.
nice job overall
and please have shiho in it soon!!
take care!

OMG

i love this story!

plz update soon

yeah go yzak go!

OHMYGAWD! YOU'RE A FILIPINO! Mabuhay!

o.O some love polygon you've got there huh?

--"Don’t give me that Dearka! You know her huh? You know Miriallia Haww, don’t you?” when Dearka tried to deny it, he blocked it. “Na-uh! You do know her…because she’s Miriallia Haww…the one from the Archangel, who you met two years ago, who for some weird reason you can’t stop thinking of and has been in your mind for the past two years! HA! I got you figured out!"--

Go! Yzak, go!

LOL! that was like whoa! great suspense you put there. i could almost imagine it being animated. and i like the way you've managed to preserve everyone's personalities. though, Miri may be a little too outgoing here. but we'll see. keep it up! great plot btw. i love the humor. and i like elise as an OC. she doesn't seem like an OC to me. she blends perfectly with all the other characters and that's great. and do update soon, ok? ^__^

Interesting...

LOL..this is my first time reviewing...guess i've just been lazy..so shiho is finally coming huh? wonder how that's gonna be!! guess i'll just have to wait and see