I love that song and it works with Snape.. Also makes me think of Draco, too... Good translation, much better than the other I've seen. Good story!

Very well written. Keep up the good work!
(and Berry is a very cool song)

Interesting... I guess. I suppose it might help if I had actually heard the song before (and no that does not mean that I want you to insist that I hear it, lol) About the other story (Combined Fates, I think it was), I can't review Ch.1 again cause I already did. So I'll tell you here. I enjoyed it. Poor He-snape. I must tell you that I don't really like the idear of an American in Harry Potter but I guess it's alright. Mwah ha ha. I'm off. Ciao!

The song had me confused for a while, but the rest was really well written. I love Severus to death, and your little story here was great. :)

Uh... ok... I didn't get any of this. It didn't really make a whole lot of sense. Needs more dialogue too.

Wow, this was really good.