Very good. The atmosphere is set well, and even the lack of dialog is perfectly fitting.

Oh wow. Fantastic.

I loves me some puppy love, but this...this was heart-wrenching. Bravo.

eh?

aww!

the poor guy!

I'm also glad that you didn't mak it obviously, nice subtleties (if that is a word)

Can I draw itty-bitty hearts in bright red ink around your stories? Can I?

...In other words...

I love this story and it has been immediately added to my favs list, as have you to my favorite authors list and alert.

Tootles.

Story: A bit confusing but decent

disclamer:Halarious

-i love remus fics!-

this is really sad -not bad sad, though, good sad! (does that make sense?) but at the end it makes the READER smile which makes you feel part of the story ,..ah i love it!

i liked how you're not too heavy on the slash, it made the story more believeable and i could imagine it all!

keep up the good work I need to find more remus fics now

remuslover x

Sorry, I don't really have time for an essay so I'll go with short snappy response:

it's great. Only that isn't quite right because 'great' kind of implies happiness or joy (at least I think it does) and this isn't happy. It's hauntingly tragic, actually. The final conversation between Remus and Harry is very touching.

I should also say that your writing is very nice; very readable. An all-round good story then.

That wasn't really short and snappy, was it?