 InsaneOrange 3/17/11 . chapter 1omg... 3 3 3 |
 BLUKAT 3/17/09 . chapter 1 Just smile and nod. That gives me a chuckle. At least everyone is happy. Thanks for the read. |
 Sabishii Kage Tenshi 3/12/09 . chapter 1Cool. ) Are you going to continue it? |
 Cristalake 10/14/08 . chapter 1This is so sad... *sniff* :'-( It actually had me crying... I love it. |
 kuroiyousei 10/14/08 . chapter 1Hey, I randomly stumbled on this story through a sequence of events I won't bother to describe, and went ahead and read it, so now I am reviewing :D Very nice work! It's always nice to see a charitable representation of a woman in the middle of a slashy situation XD I love how it's sort of bittersweet, but at the same time accepting and not without a happy ending. Of course, any such story is going to be all the more ironically sad for knowing that everything's going to go to hell for all of them after not too long. Anyway, I enjoyed it, so thanks for the entertainment _ |
 sodapop765 10/20/07 . chapter 1Like hey, you don't mind if I use this idea in a fic of mine 'Product of a Betrayal' do you? |
 Switchblade237 7/10/06 . chapter 1Beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. I think the stream-of-consciousness effect was a nice touch too. I love the ending, even if it is sad! Very well done! |
 FlamencoPenguin 8/12/05 . chapter 1Sweet and sad and wonderful. Lily's voice is perfect for the narration and the idea is wonderful. I love how you show Lily cottoning on to the idea in the beginning and her gentle reluctance and allowance of the fact. Lovely. |
 Fee Neex 12/23/04 . chapter 1Oh, this was sweet, and from my impression of her, I think this is exactly how she would have looked at it. |
 darkanime14 7/12/04 . chapter 1i really like your fic...it's kinda sad in a way that they both love eachother...but he still thinks of sirius...and how she's ok with it...i like how you just put the words in the story to make it all come together and make sense...you are a giftes writer |
 Silvryn 8/11/03 . chapter 1Very touching, very heartfelt. The sentiments expressed in this story (even and perhaps especially the ones that go unvoiced) are simply breathtaking in the complicated simplicity deep emotion seems to embody. An enjoyable read :)
Hugs, kisses and sweet *day*dreams Silvryn |
 Shaz 6/15/03 . chapter 1 Wow! I really enjoyed this story. Don't worry about the tense changes, I barely noticed :)
Very believable, I can definitely imagine this happening (unfortunately for Lily and Remus) |
 PKNight 5/20/03 . chapter 1Wow. Just...just wow. The Voice of Denial. Smile and Nod. Wonderfully written story.
The only things I found wrong with it were a few minor spelling errors: "I became apart of their lives and group from that first day" instead of "a part". One of those that you never notice when you're reading it over yourself.
I loved this story. Wonderful. |
 specs-88 4/24/03 . chapter 1That was brilliant. I adored that so immensely. You are a terrific writer and I plan to read all of your work. Spectacular job. |
 Agiel 4/21/03 . chapter 1 Wow. I've never seen these pairings done quite this way before. I really like it, not only the twist at the beginning ( that James loved Sirius) or the twist near the end (that Sirius loved James) but also the wonderful, wonderful last few lines! |