too cute.

AWW! *fan girl squeel* THAT'S SO CUTE! XD

Woohoo...thanksgiving break...one of the rare times when I can actually - gasp - read! This was a wonderful little story. I enjoyed the humor, the awkwardness, and all the trademarks of a Senshi get-together. The way that you characterize them with only a few words is amazing to me. Good stuff, very good stuff - I love it. I also love how slowly you build up the relationship... thing...between Khri and Piccolo. It takes a lot of patience to get that sort of thing exactly right.

I hope you won that story contest! This was so good! ( I really thought they were going to kiss in this chapter...) It's so sweet and really captures the spirit of the holidays. (Even though I'm reading it in the middle of June...)

I hope you write some more of these little side stories to get more people interested in Errant Exile!

Selene

Aw...I love how delicate and sweet this was! I do wonder when it takes place...way after the carnival, it seems...? Well anyway, it was perfect. You have Piccolo's character down to mastery. I can't wait for more!

Wow. You take my breath away again fangirl style! I loved everything about this one shot and can't help but marvel at your talent for keeping everyone perfectly in character *grumbles* Almost to the point of envy!*Sobers* Both of Piccolo's gifts were perfect and I fell in love with him even more... even if the gifts WERE given to someone else >=3

Anyway, you have a loyal fan now for sure after such a masterful sequence and storyline.

LATER.ROGUEFURY

"Part 3: Decking the Halls Instead of the Saiyans" ...and why couldn't he have decked the blasted Saiyans? You know they deserve it. Especially Goku, who has apparently taken to thumping around on the roof. He certainly has taken Christmas cheer and holiday festivities to a new level.

The Piccolo-snowman and the cactus comparison were great, but compared to the "aw" when reading about his real gift... It must have been something for him to come up with a gift like that and then actually present it to her. I imagine it wasn't easy trying to keep Piccolo in character, but you did it quite well.

Very nice job. (And now it's known that Khri isn't dead... ^^)

Aw... The perfect ending. ^_^ I loved it, and wished it weren't just a one shot. Dang people need to R & R this, it's awesome! *Grumble* Oh, I thank you SO much for the review! ^_^ It rocked my face off. Chapter 2 up, if you're interested. Later!
-Ace