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| SunflowerSeedsInYourPockets 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseIt was really cute. I liked it. |
| c 2007-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseConsidering writing more? Do everyone a favor: DON'T. |
| Morohtar 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseWhat is it with Star Wars writers reviewing my stuff? I do Star Trek and Narnia . . . odd! Never mind, this is great! I really love it. Despite the fact you say you despise Leia, you manage to write her exceptionally well and true to the movies; you've got the classic "feisty female" down pat. Han is a delight too - he's the classic panicker he always is. I think that the story would be strengthened by the addition of some emotional reflections from each of them, allowing you to explore the nature of their relationship to a greater degree than you are now. But, I do like this a great deal! |
| Obiwansfairiegrl 2005-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseIcan't beleive you! Did you really write that you DESPISE leia? Are you serious?? How COULD you despise her? HSe is the stongest, most heoic person in a movie ever created! I bet your obsessed with that wimpering skywalker's ** ,Padme,. aren't you? WHat the F* is your problem, honey? I mean, get a grip! You think you can survive in the fanfic world if you hate LEia? I suggest you back your A$$ on out of the HAn and Leia territory! |
| Nicole 2004-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou despise Leia? I... I... I durn get it. But she's so cool! Not Mara cool, certainly, but... Sailor Moon cool? Eh. I don't know what I'm talking about. Write more man! Improve on what stupid COPL messed up so much. |
| SailorLeia 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abuseDear Jaid Ziaen, I just had to write in and say, great job! Very Cute, please keep going, I'd like to see what happens next! ~SailorLeia |
| GreatOne 2004-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseOH, YOU DO NOT HATE LEIA! (you just pretend you do, AJ) ;) |