It was really good. I liked it. I love the way he yells at her, and the whole 'hugging' thing.
The only thing is, Ron isn't the "Watcher" of the Quidditch team, he's the "Keeper"

Hello, I read all your PPC stories and MSt:S and they are really funny, though i started crying when kathy claimed she made up castle on a cloud (and i banged my head on the wall...a lot). Anyways this story is wonderful and your english is stupendous but at one point you missed the a in Weasley and called him Ron Wesley (like the Princess Bride...*cakles*...never mind)

I don't know if you've realized this yet, but your English is about 5 times better than the average English-speaker. So no worries about that :)

I thought this was positively adorable, and very in-character. Thanks for doing my favorite couple justice!

You've just converted me to R/H. You're like a Jehovah's Witness. Only nicer.

That was extremely good R/H, by my standards. Not fluffy! Hurrah! (I only just figured out how to spell that; I've been using it a lot lately, and I always write "Hoorah".)

""So, have you heard anything from Vicky lately?"

Hermione sighed. Apparently her love life was not a subject easily abandoned."

This reminds me of a thingie on a board at the SugarQuill where Hermione said, "I've decided to write that book about weird things girl do so boys can understand them." She dropped a piece of parchment in Ron's lap and he said, "'Number One: Ask me out on a date, you prat.'" He turned it over and said, "I don't get it." I don't know why I thought of that. How strange...

I love it! Especially with an Angsty Ron in it! It's so cute! Hope you write more! Mwah!

I love it, hon'... you sure know how to write in character and the right language. one (1!) typo was all I found, but that was probably just a mistake and not 'cause you didn't know, you wrote "snooty" when it should've been "snotty". but anyways, Gee, do I like the story! think I'll make a picture for it. that pairing is made for it. great story, darling!

Aw! I liked that! It was really believable! Oh, and you said English isn't your first language.. honestly, I wouldn't have had any idea if you hadn't said that.. you write *very* well!

Oh, how sweet. I love Hermione and Ron together. It was so sweet too. Ron getting so upset, bless him. Then Hermione admitting her feelings too. Anyway, I'm sure you know what happened in your own fic, so I'll just leave with I can't wait to read more of your works.

That was perfect! I loved this line...
"All right, maybe Ron wasn't the most fabulous kisser in the world. It was quite obvious that it was his first time kissing someone, it was rather sloppy and strange, but oh, Hermione didn't care." I love the emphasis on care. This was awesome...Very believable. It was good in respect to them saying I love you- normally fics suck when they do that...it's very unbelievable and stupid sounding...but this was perfect. Just perfect. :D

aw. thats cute. i loved it. :)

Actually, i couldn't tell English wasn't your first language, your spelling and grammar was pretty much perfect.

and, the fic was really good too ;)

Woo hoo! Fluffy stories, I just love them. Im an incurable R/HG shipper too and can't picture them with anyone else but each other. Excellent stuff!

Bravo!!

Great job, no English problems that I saw.

And terribly sweet, I loved it!! I too am a firm Ron/Mione shipper, and this was a beautiful fic.

[applauds] Wonderful!! [grin]

Cute! I love ficlets! No, this is really good, and your english is fine (you have better spelling than most english writers). Ron and Hermione are the perfect couple! Thanks for the story!