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| anonymous 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, at first I had my doubts, but that was actually quite touching. Well written, and well-paced. Excellent job. |
| Poison'd 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was quite a sad story. :( You killed Bakura... But hey, there's a bit of his soul in the Ring! _< Either way, this story was good. |
| Gnos fo Ytinrete 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseAw. And Seto never knew. Maybe 'kura will search him out again in the future. Ja ne. Liliana |
| BB 2007-01-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou killed Bakura! thats just wrong, but seriously I liked it especially that moment were the Seth and Baku cuddled.Nice fic |
| LadyPhoenix99 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abuseI am so glad I came over here to read this... It's angehope99 from LJ. I loved it- beautifully written. The drama to it was very riveting. |
| lll 2005-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice. I would have liked to see more interaction between the priest and tombrobber but i suppose it is all part of the fleeting moments they have with each other. Realistic and cool. |
| ttSerenity 2005-01-11 ch 1, | abusenice, keep updating. I'm just curious, which poem did you use? |
| Anya 2005-01-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhy did you have to kill Bakura, He was beginning to be my favorate character! Other than that I really liked the detail and how you described everything that was going on in the scenes. |
| StainofCurare 2004-12-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was a FANTASTIC story. Most authors would ruin the ending by having Seth come up with a cheesy escape plan, but you left it as is. Very sad and solemn, but somehow more realistic. Interesting how it's supposed to be AU, but it could tie in with Takahashi's original story. I also like how this story admits that Yami/Atemu is not a saint and would be glad that a person who has been a thorn in his side is having their head lopped off. It definately pulls him away from the enemy-loving friendship speaking role he is usually cast in. I would suggest a sequel, but it would be mostly made of Seth's feelings towards that day's events, wouldn't it? Or you could have Bakura confront Seto Kaiba in the present. Something to think about. |
| Setalina Muro 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abuseSo Bakura's final wish was to be loved? It was a good story, well written (although despite popular belief, the name of the ancient priest was Set, anyway not really important). It was a good fiction. I think I, personally, would rather like to see a sequal made to this story. I think I'll see if you have any other fanfictions. Keep it up! Cheers! ~Lina~ |