| Reviews for The Christmas Gift |
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BoxerBitch 12/26/05 . chapter 1That was cute! Haos shaman princess got me into this couple! Well, keep it up. |
Government Man 1/3/05 . chapter 1 Hello. I was directed here by the author's friend on , Korishimo. I'm just gonna copy and paste my thoughts from there... I thought it was very well written. The writer used complete sentences, indented, and was pretty good spelling wise, too. Story wise, it was brilliant. That's all I can think to say... |
thekatgrl 1/2/05 . chapter 1aw... how sweet. I really liked the banter in the beginning, it made me laugh. Merry Christmas to you too! |
ADnAMa 12/29/04 . chapter 1 This is very sweet... Riku is my favorite character from KH, and I have been looking for a capturing SaRR fic. Beautiful work, keep writing. Made my heart melt. |
RESCUExMe 12/29/04 . chapter 1omg! that was so kawaii! i love it! |
Evil Pancake 12/28/04 . chapter 1 This just wants me to say one thing: Aw. x3 |
Reina-183 12/28/04 . chapter 1One word: Cute! That was so incredibly sweet! _ |
Zelphie 12/28/04 . chapter 1 *purrs* So cute! *giggles* It was really adorable knowing that Riku was so horny near the beginning.. XD Good one shot. - I hardly ever review anymore to stories I read...but this one was so cute! - -Zelphie |
squalmasy 12/28/04 . chapter 1How adorable! You will certainly receive more reviews when people begin to come back to this KH section. This is so cyute! I love your writing. Some people have a great talent for shonen ai fluff and you, my friend, are one of them. One suggestion I make is to add commas to add to the readers' understanding of the story, but thats seriously a minor suggestion since I just can't find anything else wrong with it! Tee hee. Wonderful! I'll continue to read your work. Love always and muchly, R |