aw so cute i love this pairing should of made the kissing part a bit longer though lol am retarded right?

this was a really great story. i'm glad that someone mentioned it in a fanfic of theirs.

this was really sweet, and i liked how jinx kept trying to get with raven--even though raven kept pushing her away. i'm glad that this story had developments in it, instead of something TOTALLY unbelievable as to have raven and jinx falling in love at first sight.

so i commend you on your wonderful work. keep it up, it really is great! good luck in future writings, whether they be on ff. net or somewhere else!
-naomi

sweet! all is good! yes! thanks for the fic!

yes! fluffy, cute and above all...she finally confess and got it! woot!

what!? the! hell!! damn damn damn

yes! someone is warming up to Jinx! *cheers*

poor Jinx, hope Raven warm up to her soon

very interesting, will read more!

you have a nice writing style and the story flows well. The characters were mostly in voice and the few points where they seemed to stray were the areas where you force-marched the romance. (Raven inviting Jinx into her room was a jarringly out of character moment, and, while the interaction between them was handled well, you could have accomplished the result in a common area of the tower with the other team members occupied outside of the tower.) Overall, I think you did a good job of bringing Raven around to seeing and accepting Jinx's interest. The story was sweet and poingant at times. I found myself really rooting for Jinx from the start of the third chapter.

I would have liked to see a more in depth explanation for Jinx's change of heart and initial obsession with Raven, but even without that, I really enjoyed the story.

Alex

I love this story, and the whay you right these two.

kix **! keep going

wow i loved this story. one of my fav raexjinx stories now! x

wow a good story w/ an unusual pairing... ud don't see that too often.

Good story! I liked how Jinx's character seemed to fit her perfectly. Though I think the ending could use a little work, it was an overall exelent story!

Oh my God...

*looks at self* I am a JinxRaven shipper!

Great fic! Very charming ^ ^ I love how you portray the characters, you can really fall in love with them ^ ^