|Reviews for The Rohan Pride Chronicles, Part I: Alone|
| Anatone 1/7/09 . chapter 35
well, great job, didn't notice any mistakes
| Anatone 1/7/09 . chapter 34
very very good. i liked this chapter, though it hasn't been my favorite since she came to Mordor. oddly enough, i liked the one where Borogor had to clean her back after he knifed her. I have no idea why, but it's probably because of my sick and twisted mind.
you used the wrong form of your/you're twice, but other than that it was perfect
| Anatone 1/7/09 . chapter 33
god i love this story. it's so cool!
| Anatone 1/7/09 . chapter 32
uh oh. she's gonna get mad at Borogor. that's not very nice. lol
great writing, but i don't like the subject very well. haha
| Anatone 1/7/09 . chapter 31
me loved it! only one mistake.
"They said that I was servicing you… as woman"...it should say as a woman
| Anatone 1/7/09 . chapter 29
dude that sounds freaking painful.
| Anatone 1/7/09 . chapter 28
dude. if i was her i'd be killing myself, but there were the children to think about too...hmm.
excellent writing as always
| Anatone 1/7/09 . chapter 27
good job. you were right. it really does start to pick up after we leave Isengard. haha, i love it
| Anatone 1/7/09 . chapter 26
aw. see, see. that's why you never listen to pretty faces. they lie an aweful lot.
oh, and in my last few reviews, i've forgotten to comment. I only have one. GREAT JOB
| Anatone 1/6/09 . chapter 25
Hah! told you Haldor was no good!
| Anatone 1/6/09 . chapter 24
hm...I'll bet you a million to one that Haldor isn't as nice as Guthwyn thinks he is. I believe this is called situational irony, haha
| Anatone 1/6/09 . chapter 23
hm...very weird. why would Sauron have kindhearted men inside Mordor? very very interesting and confusing
| Anatone 1/5/09 . chapter 22
poor kidlets. :(
| Anatone 1/5/09 . chapter 21
hm, i wonder what the special event was? i guess i'll just have to go and read it, lol
| Anatone 1/5/09 . chapter 20
aw. Poor Cobryn
one time i was climbing a tree, and the branch i was standing on broke and i fell 18 feet. the bone was sticking oout and i have to have 2 surguries to put in place, but i still got a an infection and was running a 106 degree fever.
i don't know why i shared that, but maybe it had something to do with Cobryn. sorry if i grossed you out, lol