hum...interesting. :$

well, great job, didn't notice any mistakes

very very good. i liked this chapter, though it hasn't been my favorite since she came to Mordor. oddly enough, i liked the one where Borogor had to clean her back after he knifed her. I have no idea why, but it's probably because of my sick and twisted mind.

you used the wrong form of your/you're twice, but other than that it was perfect

god i love this story. it's so cool!

uh oh. she's gonna get mad at Borogor. that's not very nice. lol

great writing, but i don't like the subject very well. haha

me loved it! only one mistake.

"They said that I was servicing you… as woman"...it should say as a woman

dude that sounds freaking painful.

lovely chapter

dude. if i was her i'd be killing myself, but there were the children to think about too...hmm.

excellent writing as always

good job. you were right. it really does start to pick up after we leave Isengard. haha, i love it

aw. see, see. that's why you never listen to pretty faces. they lie an aweful lot.

oh, and in my last few reviews, i've forgotten to comment. I only have one. GREAT JOB

Hah! told you Haldor was no good!

hm...I'll bet you a million to one that Haldor isn't as nice as Guthwyn thinks he is. I believe this is called situational irony, haha

hm...very weird. why would Sauron have kindhearted men inside Mordor? very very interesting and confusing

poor kidlets. :(

hm, i wonder what the special event was? i guess i'll just have to go and read it, lol

aw. Poor Cobryn

one time i was climbing a tree, and the branch i was standing on broke and i fell 18 feet. the bone was sticking oout and i have to have 2 surguries to put in place, but i still got a an infection and was running a 106 degree fever.

i don't know why i shared that, but maybe it had something to do with Cobryn. sorry if i grossed you out, lol