|Reviews for The Rohan Pride Chronicles, Part I: Alone|
| Callie 3/4/06 . chapter 64
I'm again amazed at the quality of your writing.
I just had to say that.
| Orion'slover 3/2/06 . chapter 61
w0w. you would definitly give tolkien a run for his money, cant wait for more
| Callie 2/26/06 . chapter 58
Discovering this story has ruined my entire day. For the record, I am naming you responsible when my boss asks me why the project I'm working on isn't done yet. That's right. Because I've been busy reading fan fiction. And damn good fan fiction at that!
If you haven't noticed by now, I have become addicted to your story. To the point of blowing of work to finish reading it.
On a more serious note, it's really hard to find an original character that is, well just that, original. You pulled it off. Your character just feels real to me and you managed to make her a believable product of her surroundings (both Rohan and Modor, while not making her weak or a monster.
I just want to say great job!
On a side not, I'm surprised more people aren't reviewing this story as it really stands out in a see of unimaginative fiction. Well, there's no accounting for taste, is there?:)
I do hope you keep updating this regularly.
And thank you for a wonderfull reading experience.
| Haley 2/25/06 . chapter 55
Disturbing, very very very well written, just discovered this a couple of weeks ago and loving how often you're updating. Haunting. Yes, a tad slow some places. Still, being one of the few stories in this website that are cohesive and spell-checked, thank you! Love it!
| IceDragoness1 2/12/06 . chapter 46
I've been following this story for awhile and I've finally gotten around to reviewing.
Very well written, a little slow moving at times but still very good.
Looking forward to reading more.
| Elena 1/17/06 . chapter 34
Happy part. One of the few, I must admit. They are welcomed when they come.
| Orion'slover 1/17/06 . chapter 34
amazing story, cant stop reading it, cant wait for the next chapter.
| lanie 10/4/05 . chapter 14
Oh my goddess, that's absoultely horrific. But still wicked awesome.
| Zoe 5/15/05 . chapter 5
Yay updates. Thank you thank you thank you thank you! You updated FINALLY! Your a really good writer. I hate you. Keep up the good work! From Zoe!
| Xia 5/1/05 . chapter 1
*sighs happily* Lovely story! I think I should hang around you-know-where more often if it means finding stuff like this. :)
And to the person below... Yeh gads, girl! Get. Over. It!
| xMoonDropx 4/30/05 . chapter 1
I was gonna write an e-mail, but you don't have an address listed, so I'm just gonna do this through a review. You left me a review on a story that I wrote awhile ago. Look, it's a fanfic that my friends wanted done and made me post so a lot of the stuff in there was for them. You were talking down to me like I know absolutly nothing about the LotR universe, and if I didn't know anything about it, then I would have just accepted your review, but I know a lot about it. So...
First off, there are places you can go to learn how to wield a sword and shoot a bow and arrow. It is not impoosible for ordinary people to learn how to use weapons.
Second, it's a fanfic for Christ's sake. And to make things much easier for me and to make the story go by faster, everyone speaks English. Tons of people do it and its just so we don't have to spend like 20,0 chapters on having the people learn the Common Tongue or either of the Elvish languages.
Third, they're not three random girls. If things hadn't gone to hell in my life and with my friends, I would have gone on with the story and you would have seen. And in the summary it says "When they sensed that a great war would soon be upon Middle Earth they sent their daughters to Earth. Now the three girls have come to Middle Earth to join the fellowship."
Fourth, there would have been a flash back later on where someone in the fellowship was talking to one of the girls and saying how Gandalf had told them about the girls.
Fifth, no one can be batter than the Fellowship. That's just how it is. There are some who may be close, but never better. Besides, the girls are klutzes. They couldn't be better. They can hold there own in a fight, but they'll need help.
Sixth, I know the ages of the Fellowship. I know they're old. Don't talk like you know more than me, alright?
Seventh, why would I explain in the first chapter what they're doing there? There's a little bit of info in the summary saying they're important and if I go off saying why they are in the first chapter, the story is completely pointless. Itwould just end up being the whole thing over again with three girls and no readers wondering why they are really there.
And lastly, the story is over. I'm pronbably just going to end up deleting it but whatever. There is a new version of it that is much better, but it reminds me of things I would rather forget so I won't be posting it.
Just remember, never talk down to an author. It makes you look really bad and like a total bitch.
| toratigergirl11 2/12/05 . chapter 1
You know you have to update now, right? Oh, shut up.
| jen 1/22/05 . chapter 2
Sweet more soon!
| jen 1/22/05 . chapter 2
Sweet more soon!
| Zoe 1/21/05 . chapter 2
WRITE MORE! It is very good. ( It should be. This is you we are talking about and you have been working on it for 2 years!