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Reviews for: Then One Second
sara 4/19/01 . chapter 1
I loved this story. Read it. It is really good. But I didn't like how AndrAIa killed so easily.
MiraD 3/9/01 . chapter 1
cool fic. You should write more. I did think that the plot was a little rushed, but that didn't really matter. It was still really good.
Nightgirl 3/9/01 . chapter 1
This is one sweet story! I luv it! I'm so glad that Erin's ASCII got kicked.
jennifer 3/8/01 . chapter 1
i loved it
Andi 3/7/01 . chapter 1
Hey! This was wonderful and I just wanted to review it. I've so many stories on here I can't remember if I read this one or not.
Andi 3/2/01 . chapter 1
Hey I love Matrix and AndrAIa too. Isn't it obvious though,look at my e-mail address. You should really write some more fics about them.
The Infernal Jynk 3/1/01 . chapter 1
Well, I've read worst. The idea is good, but you rushed through the story and didn't really take the time to set the characters up properly. Also, watch how you write dialog; I had a hard time following who was speaking in this story.
Silvy 3/1/01 . chapter 1
God, this fic was confusing.
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