You ever going to update this? :'

Are you ever going to continue this fic? It was getting SO GOOD!

I love the concept of this story! :D I can't wait for the next chapter.

This is amazing. Aside from the odd grammatical error I can't really find anything wrong with this story. You have a real nack for these characters, though Eff seems a little "touchy-feely." (in a physical sense, not an emotional one)

Story question: Why doesn't Devi call Tenna and ask for help? If she doesn't have a phone, then my bad, I haven't read "I Feel Sick" yet.

Keep up the good work! I can't wait to find out how it ends.

Ohmahgawd. This is just awesome. I love that you elaborated on the whole mind parasite part of the Vasquez universe and made it good. It's rare to find a fic that has a creative story that fits in with the canon stuff.

A few minimal grammatical errors here and there, but not to the point that it's distracting.

Keep up the superduper neato work! :D

aw! Devi still loves Nny! xD *happy* (you should change the genre to Angst/Romance )

Ohh, an update in a very long time.

I love it so far!

is Nny going to make an appearance?

Awesome story! You deserve far more reveiws then you currently have. I cannot wait to see what exactly Eff has planned for Sickness.

There are not nearly enough well-written fics featuring either of the doughboys. Yours is phenominal, and I eagerly await the next chapter!

Wo this is very interesting and well written might I add. Please update!

Your writings are my favorites, and this story seems just as good! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Horray! Another great story coming from the Tenderloin Factor!

I believe this is the only exceptionally good Devi-based fic I've ever read. Feel honored.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Don't take to long with it. Or else.

wow this is great. I really liked it, you really got eff and sickness down. I can't wait for the next chapter!