i love this! XD
it sound pretty much like Mizuki. XD
(i'm not quite sur about the pocker thing through, but it was pretty funny as a metaphore. huhuhu, i like the way you write.)
it was very funny. X)
fav~

I really like this. The last bit is beautiful. XD And oh so true... I think you managed to write Mizuki really well. I think I may have to favorite this one. *nod*

Hmm... I don't really understand the fic but Mizuki sounds interesting. I love him anyway. ^^

Hee, can't help looking up your profile after my review for 'Domesticated' and surprise surprise... you're a PoT writer as well! *squee*

Mizuki and Yuuta... yum! That aside, wonderful story and it's clever how you incorporated poker into all this. Nice job! ^^

Mm...I had to read it twice before I understood it, but when I did, the only thing I could think was "wow." ^.^;; The thoughts and ideas are unique and well woven together, and I like how you take Mizuki and change him into a person who THINKS and PLOTS, rather than just a frivolous little boy. Hope that I'll see you around this fandom more, please keep on writing~