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Reviews For: His Sister

Shannan
2004-12-29
ch 2, anon.
abuseHoney, you were so worried about capturing Maya's personality.. it's perfect. Far beyond the first signs of Evolution.. she was exactly that. She was a war within herself.. you capture that perfectly.. You've done such an amazing job with this.. I can't wait to read more.
Faded-Justice
2004-12-29
ch 1,
abuse:P hey its Faded_Justice from the livejournal community. I like how this is started off, good job with it. ^_^
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