i don't know what to write, it struck a chord and i really felt it, this is beautiful

Aww... That made me sad. =(

Hmm...the whole marionette, puttet-on-strings is just a tad to obvious in the case of Sephiroth and Cloud to be really satisfying, I think you need to develop it more, use it more subtly if you get my drift.

"So I picked up my strings and I tied them tightly around my wrist to make you happy."

This line however, I loved. I'm not sure if it agrees with how I view Cloud, but it's such an elegant formulation that I just go M ^^

BTW, read your presentation:
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My god, teh angst! This is a cool drabble! Unfortunately for Cloud his love is unrequited! :-(

wow. thats quite a unique perspective.