Coooooooooool...

that was . . . WOW! I mean, it's Robert Frost meets Steven Speilburg (For lack of a better connection). Such creativity and amazing wording! I mean, sometimes poems are just so rediculous and stuff and sometimed I totally don't get them but yours was crystal clear and it portrayed so much emotion! You are nothing short of a genius! You, I surmise, are sooo going places!

Hey! This is really awesome. I never looked at his change in appearance this way before. Very well written!

Nothing short of brilliant, but they have the exact same personality, josh turns into max steel without missing a beat

You're a very tallented writer, Ellen.

I didn't Know you were on ! Ok, you're going straight on Favorite authors. One thing. Rearrange PC so that it's one fic with several chapters (which is what the chaptering system is there for). This is the friendly warning before somebody sics Xing on you.

Oh msn...this is so great. :) You rock, Ellen. :)

Are you talking of Max Steel?

oooooooo...

Here, let me tell you how I read this, (because I'm strange and think you should know these things) I read the first stanza of course, and was like, "Wow. Does it get any better than this? How is she going to top that?" Of course I make my way to the second and notice that it is a rhyming couplet. Have I ever told you how much I hate those? They are so often so horribly done. Yet, I kept reading and to my surprise... This was amasing! You have now written the best rhyming couplet I have ever read. *applause all around* Good girl. Great work. Can't wait to see some more. *waves and runs off, throwing chocolate coffee packets in the air*

Girl, that was just a WOW! YOu're awsome at poetry. Keep it up! Catch ya later! Luv ya all!

-Maxy Steel