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| lilcutie0918 2006-07-25 ch 3,  | abuseNice story. I loved it. Sorry my review is soo short. I don't know what else to say. |
| Agent Silver 2005-01-14 ch 3, | abuseAww. That was cute! |
| K9 the First 2005-01-11 ch 3, | abuse*sigh* A true work of art. |
| LordLanceahlot 2005-01-11 ch 3, | abuseaw that was a sweet ending. Thanks for the story! |
| jjonahjameson 2005-01-11 ch 3, | abuse'First...watch your language.' Great, just great. Kudos for the story, I loved it. |
| steph88NYC 2005-01-10 ch 3, | abuseAnd they all lived happily ever after =). This is a great story, closetfan. The ending is especially touching. |
| Indigo Spirit 2005-01-10 ch 3, | abuseReally graet updated. I like it. |
| hazelle 2005-01-10 ch 3, | abuseThis is such a great, moving, touching and all those words that mean the same thing story! Great ending and the scene when Joey knocks on Peter's door was very sweet. Please update We can't all keep secrets soon! |
| spyder290 2005-01-10 ch 3, | abuseI like that Joey was clever enough to figure that Peter was Spider-Man. Another great story, I really enjoyed it. |
| daveykins 2005-01-09 ch 3, | abuseGood story indeed! |
| jjonahjameson 2005-01-07 ch 2, | abuseNeat perspective and different idea. I'm interested to see where you take this--what can Spidey do in a situation like this? And what's Vinny up to? Good writing. Love it. |
| Indigo Spirit 2005-01-01 ch 2, | abuseRather good.Please write more soon. |
| hazelle 2005-01-01 ch 2, | abuseO that's interesting! A very sweet and funny chapter, loved the bit with Spidey scaring off Vinny and his gang. Curse those dratted cliffhangers! :P |
| K9 the First 2004-12-31 ch 2, | abusePoor kid. What 're Vin and his thugs gonna do? |
| steph88NYC 2004-12-31 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter, closetfan =). I love this story. |